Hey everyone,

I'm looking for a little help with a story idea I'm working on. Any thoughts, ideas or feedback on the plot, you may have would really help get my over a slight case of writers block.

The story I'm working on is based on a story by a fellow member named Kortpeel and the re-write I did of the same story. (With his permission of course)

Here are links to both stories if you want to check them out:

Melaney's Surprise - By Kortpeel:

https://eunuchworld.co/s1029

Melanie's Surprise - By Myself (Kynetic01)

https://eunuchworld.co/s13979

Plot idea:

The main plot of my new story centers on a young married couple in their mid to later 20's. They are both quite adventerous in their sex life and love each other. The wife is the more sexually dominant of the two and a very beautiful aspiring model. The husband is not your average wimpy hubby, he's actually quite attractive, in shape and quite well hung.

After exploring many different types of sex and dabbling with D/s play, they both decide to spend a vacation at a specialist private resort. This resort is especially for couples like them, its BDSM and D/s friendly, nudity is encouraged, sex is openly discussed and allowed in public (although it must be consusal) cuckolding/cuckqueaning is practiced. Certain rules are applied to submissives at their owner's requests, such as chastity, collars, etc.

Both of them leave for this resort with the idea of the hubby being castrated there. The wife wants him to be cut as it will make their relationship "perfect" in her eyes. He is a little uncertain to the point of being 50/50 about it. This is where the resort caters once again to couples like them. At their request they have asked for an "Assistant" to be assigned to them for the duration of their stay, this is common for couples in suitations like these to help them reach a mutual decision. In this case their assiatant is "Maddy" a gorgeous 20 year old blonde. It's her job to provide the couple anything they wish during their stay, including arranging BDSM play, meeting with other couples, arranging to meet with the resort's doctors, as well as sex. Also the wife has instructed Maddy to help her make up her hubby's mind about his castration, in otherwords, to help persuade him to get snipped.

Maddy and the wife take their time and pursuade the hubby that getting cut is the right decision, and after a small romantic cermoney he has his testicles removed while holding her hand.

Both hubby and wife agree they want to have him fitted with neuticle implants to retain his "macho hubby" look. At her isnistance he is fitted with implants twice as big as his testicles were, which makes his scrotum bulge slightly and hang down low between his legs. Which gets him quite a lot of attention (along with his large, now limp cock) from passing women around the resort, much to the delight of his wife. lol

I wanted to end the story with them both taking a romantic nude stroll in the gardens, where she gives him one of her "extra special" blowjobs and his big hung cock, stays limp the entire time!

Thanks for reading and I look forward to hearing your thoughts

Good idea, I like the twist that the guy getting neuticle implants, it is an idea that i think should be explored more. Very hot to think about him walking around looking like a stud with huge balls, but inside he knows that its all fake and he's actually ballless!

Thanks Jockey, I thought it was a nice diversion from the more usual vein stories seem to go on here. I want it to be a mutual thing between the husband and wife, as in only known to them sort of thing.

Did you have any thoughts you'd like to share on the story idea or plot, etc?

Maybe he could wait a few days for some reason between having his balls removed and getting the implants. He would love the fact that he is now neutered, but would feel very insecure about anyone finding out, and keep his legs very tight together. Someone might see him naked and balless, and he'd ask them to keep quiet. Then when he got the implants, he'd walk around naked all cocky with his huge "testicles", but when he ran into the person who knew, it be very exciting and scary!

Oh nice though, all cocky one minute and then insecure the next. I was going to have it perfectably acceptable for a husband/cuckold to be castrated at the resort as its kink/BDSM freindly, but as I'd been toying with the idea of additional chapters, the following one would be where they leave the resort and head home, your idea would come into play. Obviously they would be the only ones to know he was snipped, but as the really excited wife of a newly castrated hubby, she just can't wait to tell some of their kinky friends...

Hey i like this idea, he could be an interesting sort of paradox character because he gets voluntarily gets castrated and completely loves it, but is totally insecure about anyone else knowing his manhood is gone and tries to hide it.

Yea I wanted to try something new, with having him agree to be castrated instead of forced into it. Also as he is a macho guy and well hung, yet still gets castrated is a nice twist on the norm I think. The additional chapters would see them go from there and continue their relationship, albeit a little differently now that he can no longer have regular sex with his wife. I wanted him to retain his big cock after he gets snipped, but obviously it's permanently limp. His wife loves his "new cock" and her desire for it will be shown in the story as it goes along.

Did you ever finish the story, Kynetic01?