Not sure if this is the place to post this, but after trying to send a message directly and not having any luck I thought I'd try here.

I found one of your stories in the fiction archive and really liked it, so much so in fact I decided to have a go at re-writing it for fun. I have a passion for writing but so far haven't quite got the skill to tackle a whole story of my own, but hopefully that will change soon and I'll be posting my own up here.

Anyway, the story I re-worked was called "Melaney's Surprise". As I mentioned I re-wrote some elements of it and changed a few bits here and there, but by and large the main story is pretty much as you wrote it.

If you have would like to take a look at the "new" version or have no objections to me posting it up here, then let me know.

P.S.

I changed the spelling of the Title to avoid confusion with your story, it's now called "Melanie's Surprise".

Kynetic01 (imported) wrote: Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:27 am I found one of your stories in the fiction archive and really liked it, so much so in fact I decided to have a go at re-writing it for fun. I have a passion for writing but so far haven't quite got the skill to tackle a whole story of my own, but hopefully that will change soon and I'll be posting my own up here.

Anyway, the story I re-worked was called "Melaney's Surprise". As I mentioned I re-wrote some elements of it and changed a few bits here and there, but by and large the main story is pretty much as you wrote it.

If you have would like to take a look at the "new" version or have no objections to me posting it up here, then let me know.

Hi Kynetic 01,

First of all thank you for the feedback and I am happy that you liked the story. You are more than welcome to rewrite the story and post it on the archive. I look forward to reading it. And I wish you every success with your own stories.

Regards

Kortpeel

Hi there,

Thanks for the message, I hadn't expected such a fast response.

I'll try and get it up straight away, I hope you enjoy the re-write as much as I enjoyed the original.

Story sent and waiting on approval. I've no idea how ling that might take, but I hope its posted up there quickly

It will show up next Friday provided there are no issues with it. I too look forward to reading it.

Thanks, I can't wait to see it up

I was jjust wondering, did the story go up, or was it ok?

New story postings were a bit delayed.

My fault for distracting our new Editor.

hahaha thats ok