I really like Sander's new story. I especially like story line about the twins. I hope that Spencer recovers from what happened to him and he can carry on as well as he did before.

There are a many characters in this story. I would find it useful if Sander put a brief list of characters and the state of their genitalia as of the beginning of that story part. For example:

_________ leader of the church boys. He is castrated but has a penis. (I left out the name so as to not give anything away to people who have not read part one.)

WARNING!! All the characters in this story are minors. This story has rapes, consensual and nonconsensual castrations, a murder, a partial penectomy and a character loses his penis to an infection.

You can find Sander's story here:

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Sand ... e%20Flies/

I just read part 20. I hope Eric prevents Johnny from doing what he wants to do.

Part 21 has some interesting developments. Maybe Roger will do to all the boys (one at a time) what he did to David. Maybe Roger will give every boy a choice of what he did to Roger or what he did to Ian.

Is anyone else reading Sander's story?

curious_guy (imported) wrote: Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:13 pm Part 21 has some interesting developments. Maybe Roger will do to all the boys (one at a time) what he did to David. Maybe Roger will give every boy a choice of what he did to Roger or what he did to Ian.

Is anyone else reading Sander's story?

I think many of those that commented on stories no longer come around, since there are no longer stories to read.

I am still around and have been reading Sander's latest story, wasn't sure if ok to post here about it.

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Interesting story - can't wait for next edition.

Slammr (imported) wrote: Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:18 am I think many of those that commented on stories no longer come around, since there are no longer stories to read.

Do you know if Sander reads the comments on his story?

I just read part 22. I really liked it. I hope that Eric will hit Johnny with a rock, tie him up and do to him what he did to Lester. He might even do a little more.

bella (imported) wrote: Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:25 am I am still around and have been reading Sander's latest story, wasn't sure if ok to post here about it.

Maybe one of the moderators should post a sticky with guidelines as to what kind of comments about stories are acceptable here, especially if the stories have minor content.

curious_guy (imported) wrote: Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:37 pm Do you know if Sander reads the comment

curious_guy (imported) wrote: Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:20 pm s on his story?

Sander does read the comments.

Maybe one of the moderators should post a sticky with guidelines as to what kind of comments about stories are acc

eptable here, especially if the stories have minor content.

Although this isn't official, I would suggest not posting any explicit descriptions of what's going on in any minor content story. I'll leave it up to others whether comments on such stories posted elsewhere are allowed or not. I don't see anything wrong with reviewing stories in this thread no matter where they're posted, but whether we allow reviews of minor content stories, I'll leave up to someone else. I personally don't see anything wrong with the comments made so far.

I'd just like to point out that a tearful, nearly crying, reaction to a story is extremely rare for me...

... but this story made me squirt a tear when one of he twins left when feeling ignored by his twin.

Way to get the emotion out of a reader, Sander. Yikes.

I look forward to more!