Since you got no E-Mail adress in the story: Plz tell the story to the end. Maybe it would be nice to have the balls and the dick back on him to restart the procedure some days later again.

This is a great story! Hope you write some more.

I loved that you picked such a fascinating idea and that he could still feel everything even though it was severed.

I liked the ambiguous ending though -- it leaves the story open for at least a sequel or two, or maybe even a dream. The girlfriend seemed a bit impersonal with him or even his parts -- perhaps because they've done it some many times in the past already (although may not yet with the snake)?

Starting off with a snake set the bar a little high, I was thinking there's a prequel story to be had with them getting the knife and experimenting with sticking his severed parts in various things that they normally can't be stuck in - but are less risky/fun, eventually graduating on to the snake.

Then a sequel involving them moving onto something riskier than snake stomach acid, and perhaps finally losing it in something that they couldn't get it back from. Or maybe they decide to cut off his balls and cock separately so they can try putting them in different places at once but then he ends up losing one of them, wants to stop doing this in the future, but is talked into playing with the other half.

There are so many possibilities with this storyline! Lots of potential.

Thanks again for writing it!

This is one of my favorite stories. I hope you continue the series. Thanks for sharing this fantastic story.

I actually hope he uploads it again, because it doesn't seem to be up at the archives.

So please do, It's one of my favorite story's.

Denmelsan (imported) wrote: Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:22 pm I actually hope he uploads it again, because it doesn't seem to be up at the archives.

So please do, It's one of my favorite story's.

Next update, it will appear, I have just finished editing it for the new Archive.

I am working my way through the requests.

You'll get it very soon.

Great story. It's a creative concept that allows the excitement of losing it while teasing the victim with its replacement. Really wish the author would expand on the idea! Barring that, perhaps someone else could.