Interesting story but MY GOD! What ever happened to paragraphs, proper spelling and spacing?
It's all run together. To damn hard to read.
Two thumbs down!
Big Balls by First Timer
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Re: Big Balls by First Timer
shadowboi (imported) wrote: Thu Mar 24, 2011 1:19 pm Interesting story but MY GOD! What ever happened to paragraphs, proper spelling and spacing?
It's all run together. To damn hard to read.
Two thumbs down!
The story (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/B/ea_1541big_ball.htm) was posted in 2001 when about any story was being accepted. It would not make it past the moderators today. If there are no paragraph breaks, a story will be rejected.
Although I don't wish to discourage any feedback, it always helps if those giving it provide a link to the story, as I have here.
I don't want to discourage first time authors, but if they've ever read a story, they would know not to post a story as one long paragraph; and a spell checker is included in about every word processor.
I just read one of my old stories, and although I'm embarrassed by how bad it is, I can see that my writing has improved. Stories don't have to be perfect to be posted here, but they can't be a total mess, either.