Just came across this story by Wantitoff. I enjoyed the story very much. I guess it is because when I was about 4 or 5, my siblings and I were roaming on the farm and I had to pee. My older brothers told me to go off the road we were walking on and pee. So, I did. Alas, there WAS an electric fence where I started peeing. I never peed so much ion my life. The pee carried the current into me . Sorry to say, the experience did not affect me the way is did the boy in the story. All I did was bawl and PEEEE. Ah, sweet memories of growing up in the country.

You inspired me to read this one, which was very well written. The story was tight, with few errors, and totally believeable.