While I write primarily for my own (erotic) satisfaction, it is always an added bonus to know others are reading and have a reaction. If anyone would care to comment on "Puppy Love" or the earlier related story "Guard Dog on Duty", I would love to have the criticism.

Allen,

I read 'Guard Dog on Duty', admired the invention and thought that it was quite well written, but I am afraid that it is just not the sort of story that I really enjoy.

Haven't read 'Puppy Love' yet, so cannot comment, but well done anyway. Anyone who can hold their thread long enough to commit it to paper wins my admiration.

LOL