"Ayzintion City - The Teaching..." and "Popped"

[Nathan (imported)]

I really don't want to solicitate inputs, but I'm just so damn curious that I've got to ask the question, and since this is the "feedback" area a few inputs would be really appreciated. I put two stories on the site, "Ayzintion City - The Teaching of a Lesson" and "Popped!". They are so different; one is fairly long and thought out and continues a saga of sorts and the other one is short fast and in a way, painful to even read much less contemplate.

My question is WELL? I mean, since neither story generated any feedback I assume they were bombs. Thats OK...cause if I knew WHY I could perhaps fix them if/when I try again. I have a pretty thick skin, so just let me know.

[Charlieje (imported)]

I for one liked "the teaching of a lesson" a lot. I wasn't quite so crazy about "popped," but not for any lack of writing skills. Frankly I think you did a good job with both stories, but all our stories are not going to please everyone.

I wouldn't suggest you change what you're doing, Nathan. I love the Ayzintion City stories myself, but I realize that sooner or later you will just run out of variations. But I assure you I will read anything you write, and I promise to try and do better with feedback.

[Paolo]

My faithful companion and ever helpful cohort Bboy must have let POPPED out and I missed it!

As for the Azyntion City tales, well, there's just not a whole lot more you can do with them to make them any BETTER! They're great so far! I have to say, I haven't disliked a single one of them.

My favorite, however, is still the Festival story where the famous characters are all to be seen doing their things!:p

[Erik (imported)]

Not getting any feedback on a story from EA readers is normal. The only feedback I got from my latest story was from 2 of my friends who I chat with on MSN and ICQ. I received no feedback in E-mail or in the forums.