Nice beginning, Sarah Calendri. I look forward to seeing how it

develops. Its very stylish so far, and I hope it remains so.

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Part Three is on its way to the archive.

I'm not sure whether I want this to be a Four or Five part story. I have so many ideas.

Yet I could always save them for later stories.

Yes, don't clutter up the story with too many different things.

Keep it simple, that gives it greater power and impact.

Great work! I loved part 3, as well. I look forward to part 4.

In my mind's eye, I see the ultra-virile Marco, naked and

helpless, his ass in the air, his legs spread, and his

heavy scrotum dangling low and vulnerable, while Lady

Celeste takes it all in, gloating on her power, and wet

with anticipation at what is to come.

But don't let my fevered imaginings interfere with what

you had in mind, Sarah.

Oh, I read some of your other stories, Sarah, and they're all a little

too gory for me. Oh well, different strokes, as they say.