Gizz Mann and Finder, I just got around to reading chapter 3, and I have to complement you guys. I didn't have any hand in writing the last two chapters, but you certainly understand the spirit of the original story that I wrote. You continued it the same way I would have, added some twists of your own, and hit just about every erotic fetish that goes with the idea. Kudos!

coinflipper,

thanks for your kind words. GizzMan wrote the narrative of the last 2 chapters of CG in LV, and I did a substantial amount of cleanup and re-writes on them, and posted them. Last email from G-M was he was going to work in a country that might not permit access to forums like EA, and that was the end of it, as far as I can tell.

Thanks for the original great concept, it was a pleasure to expand on it and develop new chapters. Tanya Simmonds and I did something very similar with the story, set in France, of an American traveler discovering alternative uses of the guillotine i.e. Penis Guillotine. Since then we've expanded that story into a series of 3 each with multiple chapters. I don't think much of it got posted to EA but I will check and maybe start posting them here.

yours,

Finder