Excellent storyline and a good idea to use a celebity because the reader can use pictures of her to enhance the fantasy.

It does need more detail about his and her feeling and urges, her teasing and his feelings of humiliation.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I must admit that you're indeed correct about the lacking of details.

It was just one of those spur of the moment stories that I made up as I went along, very little thought went into writing it.

I'm writing a new story for the archive now that I hope you will also enjoy.

Here's my favourite pic of Brit... It leaves alot to the imagination. (http://www.britneyfans.com/photos/rolli ... 001/11.jpg)

If Brittney came up to me in that I would definatly let her cut off what ever she wants. Good story too. Always fun to have a star slicing and dicing.