[FONT="Georgia"]Hi BullGator,

I loved your story

Happy Trails,

Casie

Well, I know my stories have been loaded up with typos, so I apologize about that. Always looking for constructive criticism, especially as I have embarked on a series of sorts. Just a fantasy, really. But I remember some one asked for pain years ago, and my best read story, Club CBT was born. So maybe there is something that you would like.

You might consider Open Office. Spell check isn't foolproof, but it helps a lot.

An excessive amount of typos that causes difficulty in reading the story will cause it to get rejected.

Thanks Paolo, I will consider that in the future.

I also should give a shout out to other greats on the archive who have been a model: Chad Addison, Zoroaster, Nathan, Zipper, Artistic License, and many an Anonymous writer. Sorry if I left you out, I've been following the archive for a long time now, and I appreciate the work that most all the writers have been put into it.

BullGator (imported) wrote: Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:19 pm Well, I know my stories have been loaded up with typos, so I apologize about that. Always looking for constructive criticism, especially as I have embarked on a series of sorts. Just a fantasy, really. But I remember some one asked for pain years ago, and my best read story, Club CBT was born. So maybe there is something that you would like.

Hey,

I really like your Club CBT story, one of my favorites

more versions/sequels of this story with similar story line would be great!

good author, wish you wrote more stories!!

Thanks Jearns, I read your stories as well! You should write more too. I have another forthcoming in Circle...maybe I will go back and do another for CBT, I have thought about that before.

Well the latest Circle story, Guyana, is up. I think is pretty good, although I sense alot of my readers lost interest in Circle after News from the Front bored them to tears - I just love news themes, so I had to. Anyways, I'm going back to Club CBT next. I just hope I don't ruin a good thing.

Series and novel-length works often lose readers. That's just how it is. Don't feel bad about it.