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Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:58 pm
by P.P.Herz (imported)
I am a big fan of Nathan's stories on the archive. If I'm remembering right, it was one of his stories, found via Google search, that first led me to eunuch.org several years ago. I go back and reread many of his stories periodically, especially (though not exclusively) several in the Ayzintion City series. I owe him a ton of feedback, gratitude and appreciation for the enjoyment his stories have provided me over the years... Since I am terrible with e-mail correspondence, I thought I might instead "kill two birds with one stone" and make a thread here in the forums which would serve both as a place for me and others to discuss the Ayzintion City series, and as an opportunity to put up an annotated list of the stories so that those who haven't yet read these excellent stories can more easily find ones that are most to their own taste, and those who have read the stories before can more easily find their favorites for re-reading.

Even the biggest fan of this series (who may or may not be me ;)) is bound to have trouble keeping track of which story is which, as there are now thirty-seven stories in the series and his track record suggests that the number will hit 40 sometime in 2010 or 2011.

Unlike most series-type stories, the Ayzintion City "series" isn't a bunch of chapters or parts that combine to tell a single, sequential story when read in a particular order. Rather, they're linked by sharing a single setting, the fictional Ayzintion City (which Nathan has said was inspired by another archive author's stories set in the historical city of Byzantium) where slavery is part of the social structure and male slaves are frequently, and often publicly, castrated. (Non-slaves, mainly criminals, are occasionally castrated also.) Few characters appear in more than one story, however. Here's the introduction to the series that appears at the beginning of each story*:

Ayzintion City is a place like no other place on earth. It is city where the slave traders come, and the slave buyers come, and the entire city with its ancient buildings and associated businesses are all linked to the trade. It is a place where the Eastern Province and the Southern Province converge, and sometimes the slave auctions will trade as many as a thousand boys in a single week. Ayzintion City has existed since the first maps were drawn, and while it is well known among those that deal in human flesh it is almost unheard of outside of that elite circle. The city is hidden in the mountains, and it is surrounded by water and deep ravines. Unless you know the way into the city, you would never be able to find it. The majority of all slave trading that is done has its roots to Ayzintion, and if you are interested in buying or selling or you need to find a boy to own it is there that you will be drawn.

On the archive, whether one looks at the listing by author page or the listing by story title page, the series doesn't appear in chronological or alphabetical order, due to Nathan having used a variety of dash formats to separate "Ayzintion City" from each story's subtitle, and the otherwise-alphabetical (by subtitle) listing is thus broken up into clusters depending on whether the subtitle is preceded by a hyphen -, double hyphen --, en dash, em dash, etc. and the use or omission of spaces around the various dashes. Another reason I was motivated to create this listing was to have a handy place for quickly finding stories by date or (sub)title without having to resort to browser search.

Here is a list of all the Ayzintion City stories, ordered alphabetically by subtitle:

Boy with the Golden Cream, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_145136ayzintio.htm) (03/12/2003)

Brothels, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_195353ayzintio.htm) (12/06/2004)

Castrated Cutter, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_163846ayzintio.htm) (09/04/2002)

Contest, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_4919ayzintio.htm) (01/23/2002)

Crucifixion, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_205703ayzintio.htm) (02/10/2004)

Cutting Festival, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_21656ayzintio.htm) (02/15/2002) -- not to be confused with The Fuckfest (2008) or The Harvest Festival (2003)

Cutting of a Slave, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_0846ayzintio.htm) (06/01/2001)

A boy enslaved at 13, now 16, is re-sold after his previous owner loses patience with his behavior, and castrated post-auction at the direction of a new owner who has used the pain of castration to break strong-willed slaves before; the new owner's daughter both observes and participates in the castration.

Double Purchase, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_181817ayzintio.htm) (01/05/2003)

Eateries, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_84538ayzintio.htm) (01/05/2005)

Father's Gift, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_121903ayzintio.htm) (01/29/2004)

Fathers and Sons (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_0516ayzintio.htm) (12/03/2001)

Five for the Knife (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_121934ayzintio.htm) (01/31/2007)

Free Lesson, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_120221ayzintio.htm) (03/08/2007)

Friend's Dilemma, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_160358ayzintio.htm) (08/13/2003)

Fuckfest, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_110316ayzintio.htm) (03/30/2008) -- not to be confused with The Cutting Festival (2002) or The Harvest Festival (2003)

Glances (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_143022ayzintio.htm) (02/27/2009)

Harvest Festival, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_55150ayzintio.htm) (08/05/2003) -- not to be confused with The Cutting Festival (2002) or The Fuckfest (2008)

Just a Little Bit Too Much (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_1614ayzintio.htm) (01/27/2002)

Just Another Gelding (story 3 of a series) (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_0903ayzintio.htm) (11/26/2001)

Making of Slaves, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_1453ayzintio.htm) (01/18/2002)

New Technique, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_114409ayzintio.htm) (05/18/2004)

No Match for a Knife (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_55949ayzintio.htm) (08/20/2008)

One Slave’s Viewpoint (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_1739ayzintio.htm) (12/05/2001)

Price of a Lesson, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_01351ayzintio.htm) (01/16/2003)

Punishment of Two Thieves, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_1258ayzintio.htm) (09/14/2001)

Sights, Sounds, and Smells from the Slave Yards (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_81851ayzintio.htm) (10/15/2004)

Slave called Messner, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_154300ayzintio.htm) (09/12/2002)

Soldiers of Misfortune (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_162052ayzintio.htm) (02/07/2003) -- not to be confused with "The Three Prisoners" (2001)

Stealing a Young Slave's Balls (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_00135ayzintio.htm) (01/09/2004)

Stringmaker, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_41635ayzintio.htm) (10/06/2005)

Sweet Revenge (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_222207ayzintio.htm) (02/11/2002)

Teaching of a Lesson, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_150758ayzintio.htm) (05/30/2002)

Three Prisoners, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_0853ayzintio.htm) (12/21/2001) -- not to be confused with "Soldiers of Misfortune" (2003)

Tricutter, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_5500ayzintio.htm) (11/28/2001)

Twisted Trail of Slight Miscalculations, A (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_151558ayzintio.htm) (12/11/2009)

Wrong Balls, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_215032ayzintio.htm) (06/07/2004)

Youngest Cutter, The (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_3925ayzintio.htm) (01/02/2002)

Yes, clicking on the title of a story in the list will take you directly to that story on the archive.

My original plan was to include a list of elements included in each story as I annotated them, since there are numerous recurring themes in these stories and the list would be useful to those looking for (or looking to avoid) certain themes or elements, as well as for fans of the series looking for a particular story whose title they can't recall. Now that I've made a list of elements for the first story in the series, though, it's clear that -- even in a story containing only a single castration -- the lists of story elements will be too long to be included in the list of story titles without making that list too confusing to use. Instead, I'll post each story's list of elements in a separate comment in this thread, and add a link to that comment from the story listing for easy reference.

🙋 If anyone notices I flubbed a URL somehow, or if there are other pairs or groups of stories that you have a tendency to confuse (as I often do with the "festival" stories), or if I've overlooked a story element you would find useful, please comment (or PM me) so I can make changes. The whole point of this listing is for it to be useful to people besides me -- otherwise I'd just keep it on my hard drive. 💡

A list of the stories in the series in chronological order will follow in a separate comment as soon as I post this one. It won't immediately have hyperlinks to the stories on the archive (boy, did doing that take longer than I thought it would!) but I will edit those in later.

I know that people have been commenting on the various Ayzintion City stories, as well as other stories of Nathan's, on this board already. Rather than everyone having to start their own threads as they read the individual stories, though, I thought it might be nice for there to be the option to discuss the series as a whole in an ongoing thread. I'm sure there are threads going back many years, and the older they are, the less likely anyone is to see them when they want to comment on an older story they've just read or re-read.

* The introductory paragraph is missing from the second (in the order they were posted to the archive) story. Later stories preface the first sentence with "As a reminder," and about midway through the last decade (Nathan began the series in 2001!) the following lines began to appear before the original introductory paragraph as well:

This story forms yet another tale in the series that has come to be known at Ayzintion City. The series is written in such a way that it doesn’t really matter which story you read first, yet even so, they all form the tale and they are all written about the same, magical place that is found only in my mind.

Watch this thread for annotations for the other stories in the list, which will be added into the listing as I get to them...

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:00 pm
by P.P.Herz (imported)
As promised, the list of Ayzintion City stories
P.P.Herz (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:58 pm in the order they were posted to the archive:

Ayzintion City--The Cutting of a Slave (06/01/2001)

Ayzintion City--The punishment of Two Thieves (09/14/2001)

Ayzintion City—
P.P.Herz (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:58 pm Just Another Gelding (story 3 of a series) (
11/26/2001)

Ayzintion City - The Tricutter (11/28/2001)

Ayzintion City – Fathers and Sons (12/03/2001)

Ayzintion City - One Slave’s Viewpoint (12/05/2001)

Ayzintion City - The Three Prisoners (12/21/2001)

Ayzintion City – The Youngest Cutter (01/02/2002)

Ayzintion City – The Making of Slaves (01/18/2002)

Ayzintion City – The Contest (01/23/2002)

Ayzintion City – Just a Little Bit too Much (01/27/2002)

Ayzintion City—Sweet Revenge (02/11/2002)

Ayzintion City--The Cutting Festival (02/15/2002)

Ayzintion City-The Teaching of a Lesson (05/30/2002)

Ayzintion City—The Castrated Cutter (09/04/2002)

Ayzintion City—A Slave called Messner (09/12/2002)

Ayzintion City--The Double Purchase (01/05/2003)

Ayzintion City--The Price of a Lesson (01/16/2003)

Ayzintion City--Soldiers of Misfortune. (02/07/2003)

Ayzintion City - The Boy with the Golden Cream (03/12/2003)

Ayzintion City - The Harvest Festival (08/05/2003)

Ayzintion City - A Friend's Dilemma (08/13/2003)

Ayzintion City - Stealing a Young Slave's Balls (01/09/2004)

Ayzintion City - A Father's Gift (01/29/2004)

Ayzintion City - The Crucifixion (02/10/2004)

Ayzintion City - A New Technique (05/18/2004)

Ayzintion City - The Wrong Balls (06/07/2004)

Ayzintion City -
P.P.Herz (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:58 pm Sights, Sounds, and Smells from the Slave Yards (
10/15/2004)

Ayzintion City - The Brothels (12/06/2004)

Ayzintion City - The Eateries (01/05/2005)

Ayzintion City - The Stringmaker (10/06/2005)

Ayzintion City – A Free Lesson (03/08/2007)

Ayzintion City - Five for the Knife. (01/31/2007)

Ayzintion City - No Match for a Knife (08/20/2008)

Ayzintion City – The Fuckfest (03/30/2008)

Ayzintion City - Glances (02/27/2009)

Ayzintion City – A Twisted Trail of Slight Miscalculations (12/11/2009)

I still need to go through and put all the hyperlinks in, though for now it shouldn't be too much trouble to use the links in the first list (unless you're dyslexic or otherwise alphabetic-order challenged, I guess) but that won't happen today.

Do other people (i.e. YOU) think it would be useful to have the annotations (brief descriptions) and/or the "not to be confused with..." notes on the chronological list as well as on the alphabetical list? I'm happy to add them in (eventually) but I'd just as soon not do it in the first place if the majority would rather have this list be "uncluttered," so please comment or PM with your opinion, or with any other suggestions you have for the ACTG.

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:25 pm
by P.P.Herz (imported)
"Ayzintion City--The Cutting of a Slav
P.P.Herz (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:58 pm e (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_0846ayzintio.htm)" (06/01/2001)

A boy enslaved at 13, now 16, is re-sold after his previous owner loses patience with his behavior, and castrated post-auction at the direction of his new owner who has used the pain of castration to break strong-willed slaves before; the new owner's daughter both observes and participates in the castration.

"anachronistic" elements: anesthesia exists

anal-penetration device used to hold male to be castrated in place

audience of strangers

audience is crowd-sized

castration as punishment for attempted consensual heterosexual sex

castration as punishment for attempting to run away by a slave

castration is performed by a male cutter

castration is performed by an expert professional cutter

castration is performed on a table specifically designed for that purpose

castration of a slave who had been enslaved for some time already

castration of a slave who has just been purchased by a new owner

castration of a minor, 16 years old

castration takes place at a designated cutting location

castration with the intention of breaking the spirit

cutter invites teenaged girl to act as a volunteer assistant

cutter removes each testicle from scrotum before cutting them off

cutter removes scrotum separately from testicles

cutter uses cauterizing blade on stub of scrotum skin

cutter uses cauterizing blade to sever spermatic cords

cutter uses string or leather tie on scrotum before cutting

cutter's demeanor is calm and professional

description of male being castrated as dark-haired

description of male being castrated as ethnically Slavic

description of male being castrated as muscular/masculine

description of male being castrated as post-pubescent yet adolescent

enema is administered to male before castration

forced public nudity of male slave outside auction or castration settings

male being castrated becomes erect involuntarily

male being castrated begs to keep his balls

male being castrated cries after his castration is complete

male being castrated does not know his fate until he sees castration tools or location

male being castrated ejaculates before the first cut

male being castrated ejaculates while being cut

male being castrated experiences public humiliation

male being castrated gets gagged

male being castrated grunts in pain

male being castrated is advised to try to enjoy his castration

male being castrated receives hand-job from a female

male being castrated screams in pain

name of male being castrated is not mentioned

newly-castrated eunuch will be used as a sex slave by owner and/or owner's immediate family (briefly described)

number of castrations depicted in story: 1

pre-castration, other hair (face, underarms, legs, etc.) is trimmed

pre-castration, pubic hair is trimmed

pre-castration, washing is performed & described

primary POV (point of view) is the male being castrated

setting of castration scene is within Ayzintion City; characters travel there initially and leave again afterward

testicle freed from scrotum and no longer attached is visibly pulsating during/after ejaculation

testicle freed from scrotum but still attached is visibly pulsating during ejaculation

Please feel free to suggest story elements you look for -- or wish to avoid -- which can be added to these lists. There will (hopefully!) be one for each AC story eventually.

Man, Nathan packs his stories with goodies.

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:17 pm
by tjstill (imported)
I too am a fan of Nathans stories, I am inspired by them to do some of the photo manips I create on anther free site on the net which has castration cartoons and fake photo manips. I find the easiest way to find the list of his stories is to check under author name and N. That way you can get a full list very easy. I always enjoy the castration of slaves well past puberty. I am not interested in castration stories involving younger slaves. Of course history tells us that it was most common for castration to be caried out at a younger age. I wonder at the percentages though for the more ancient civilisations. The later Castrati of Italy would be all pre pubescent to preserve the voice. I think Nathans stories are very evocative and enjoy them all, often rereading favorites. Though i should join you in saying thanks.

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:54 pm
by Paolo
Thanks for doing all of this work!

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:20 am
by flattoppp (imported)
Thanks for the work. Nathan's short stories have always been among my favorites and your ordering of them is great. I tend to enjoy longer developed series/novels but his short stories shine. Pax

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:08 am
by John Sheraton (imported)
Herz, good dedicated work certainly worthy of Nathan, one of the most outstanding authors many of us have enjoyed. He has a way of blistering up tight syntax with the agony, horrific episodes, unfair conclusions raising the level of concentration and excitement in us all -- what those young males survived is inexplicable to the enjoyment and pleasure of free men, owners, and the ever gathering public whose laughs excell the cries of anguish. The worst case (or the best ever) was the women owner of an out of town theater who purchased unsold slave boys, laid them out on stage, stuffing the scrotums of one into the mouth of the next to be castrated, hot, warm, immediate and forever.💡

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 9:14 pm
by Artemidoros (imported)
tjstill (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:17 pm I too am a fan of Nathans stories, I am inspired by them to do some of the photo manips I create on anther free site on the net which has castration cartoons and fake photo manips. I find the easiest way to find the list of his stories is to check under author name and N. That way you can get a full list very easy. I always enjoy the castration of slaves well past puberty. I am not interested in castration stories involving younger slaves. Of course history tells us that it was most common for castration to be caried out at a younger age. I wonder at the percentages though for the more ancient civilisations. The later Castrati of Italy would be all pre pubescent to preserve the voice. I think Nathans stories are very evocative and enjoy them all, often rereading favorites. Though i should join you in saying thanks.

Hi

Could we have the addrees of that site

Thank you

Artemidoros

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:40 pm
by robbehr61 (imported)
The Ayzintion city Tourism Guide by P.P.Herz is a terrific idea! Nathan is such an inspired writer, with a sure hand in unveiling the erotic tales of his invented city and its peculiar trade. These stories are among my favorites on the site so far, but they can be difficult to keep in order. The story elements index you've proposed is a big project, and I'd hate to add to it, but have you considered a list of characters, noting in which stories a character repeats? I suspect that our author has linked these stories more carefully than is apparent on a first reading.

Re: Ayzintion City Tourism Guide

Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 4:18 pm
by kristoff
The author of the index is no longer a member.