http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/H/ea_155846the_holy.htm

I don't know what to do!

Another story with plot and grammar and punctuation!

:):):)

It's a "G, Minor, null" tag set, so don't read it if that bothers you.

Boy, someone doesn't like dogma, do we, Sander?!

Good grief, more fun stories... wow!

Thank you Sander! Not read it yet but wanted to give feedback quickly where it's due. You never fail to entertain.

However all these plot- grammer- punctuation-full submissions are gonna spoil our diaper-clad Sith Lord to pieces!

NOTE to readers in the future; Paolos' avatar at this moment is a new-years baby with a Darth Vader mask.

"Luke.... I am your..... baby!?"

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Paolo wrote: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:56 pm http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/H/ea_

215853the_holy.htm

Hints of Mormonism, and touchy current events on underage brides.

Very well written and content handled tastefully.

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Paolo wrote: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:56 pm h

Paolo wrote: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:46 pm ttp://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/H/ea_

215853the_holy.htm

Hints of Mormonism, and touchy current events on underage brides.

Very we

ll written and content handled tastefully.

Hell, try David Koresh and the Branch Dividians, Jim Jones and the People's Temple,

Or, http://www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,474184,00.html]this kook

This is an example of a sham running wild. You can pick the beginnings of this nightmare scenario from any exapmle on http://www.reformation.com/CSA/baptistsabuse.html] this list.

Nothing wrong with underage brides, as long as the husband is also underage. It sure beats the hell out of going to their funerals when they experiment with drugs instead of sex...

I only read stories on the Archive when there are interesting comments about them posted here on the Bulletin Board. I'm glad I've read this one (as least as far as has been posted). I've generally enjoyed stories set in plausible alternate universes where it's easy to see the slight tweak to present reality that could get us there.

Sander has created a near future which is all too plausible. I could even add a few more current events that might lead us in the direction that he has postulated. Great work. I'm looking forward to reading more of it.

Great!

You can tell in the next chapter all hell is getting ready to break loose!

Great!

Paolo wrote: Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:54 am You can tell in the next chapter all hell is getting ready to break loose!

Hurry up and post it already!

Have always enjoyed Sander stories, and I am liking this one.

Conspiracy & intrigue! Sanctimonious cult dogma for sure!

Keep dusting out that old hard drive Sander. If there are any more like this, they need to be posted.

Oh!

The next part is out, and looks like Dad is about to be 'assimilated'!

Yep, our hero is in for a rough time of it, looks like. Now Dad is out to get him.

I just read the first part. WOW! It is incredible. I will have to jack off before I read the next part. I am really looking forward to reading the other three parts. I hope there are many more.

Well, gotta admit, this is ANOTHER story that continues to grab me by the nuts without letting go.

Damn... thanks, Sander .

Anyone got a map to this town for me? If wages are high, I could open a wee print shop... :p