Hello, hope you look here to find feedback, because this story absolutely ROCKS.

I love the 'light hand' you are using on this; you are using foreshadowing to your (and us readers!) advantage, and making me DIE of curiosity about what is gonna happen next our young Benny.

Lots of little touches I'm enjoying... even Mom is calling Ben with a 'ny' on the end of his name now; did the mysterious father already... um... 'influence' her? Will Sir Dad get another dose of whatever-it-is into him? What happens when he is having a 'nap', and what on earth is going to happen to him??

Enquiring minds want to know!

Please do continue this tale... I'm looking forward to a new chapter every time I log on .

Thank you very, very much for putting so much effort into this.

Well done!

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/N/ea_224832the_new_.htm <--- part 1

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/N/ea_184252the_new_.htm <--- part 2

I agree. While I appreciate everyone's opportunity to contribute stories, it's refreshing to find a well crafted plot that is a real "page turner."

I felt the same way about "Daddy's Slave Boy" last year...any new chapters coming up on that one?

I was just telling the Nun and Slammr yesterday that I was so thrilled about having had a few stories come in at once that had it all - grammar, punctuation, plot, even a mystery!

Josh's "Discipline...", which I mentioned in another thread, "Community College", and now "TNNB" for short.

I hope the author of TNNB is reading the forum, too.

Part 3!

StefanIsMe (imported) wrote: Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:22 pm http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/N/ea_22

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Excellent story - please keep writing

I totally agree.. this is such a lovely story.. can't wait to read mor eof it

Okay, you have our rapt attention. This is quite a fascinating story.

More please.

I just gots to know how it turns out.

This story is really well written and has me checking back several times a day to see if another chapter has been uploaded!

This is a very well written story. It skirts some topics that are touchy, but does so in a most tasteful way . I too find that I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Raymar

The next chapter is out:

http://www.eunuch.org/main/index.php?special=stories

Look under "N".

Our hero still has a mystery to solve.

You finish this one, only to get another cliffhanger!

Great suspense.

Keep 'em coming, buddy.

If any mail comes to "Stories" here, I'll post it anon. for you.