what a damn shame1 another great idea and concept gone awry by not including some juicy detaials and more focus on the dude losing his erections

it makes for very boring and short "one-handed reading"

more details on how long it took before the androcor took effect, how many lexapro and primadone you took did your wife ever watch and laugh when you could not get it up??

how long did it take?? you make it sound like it happended over night?? physically impossible and dangerous..

if this is a true story a detailed re-write would be so nice as i am sure there are many readers who love chemcially castrated stories like i do

but this

just misses the mark in super great reads.

just read some of Paolo's stories how the detail adds so much to the story

Details are for readers devoid of imagination. Good writing is like well done expressionist painting. The reader sees the scene through the deliberately myopic view of the artist, and it is up to the reader to bring what is presented into clear focus.

Or looking at it another way, if you don't like the fucking story, write a better one.

then why write any way> just give a medical description and leave it at that.

how i would love to read j.K. rowling if she ever wrote some stories about castration as she really describes the action so nicely

such boring non descriptive stuff is ok but not good for the imagination

but that is one mans opinion