i wish when guys wrote stories they would consider the fact that most of us really would enjoy much more detail. The story itself has so much promise the premise is cool the dynamics were great but it was done like a medical report. It would be nice to know ,how long your dick was before she started> how the Dr injected you with numbing stuff ( which is hard to believe in the first place numbing your prostate would be interesting to read dhow it was done
the lack of detail made this possibly great story only mediocre
what a shame !!
chemically castrated by force.. what a waste!
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Re: chemically castrated by force.. what a waste!
I agree that the story could use some help, but.... Please let's all keep in mind that -
- the EA story contributors and not paid for any of their work
- places like the EA story library are an exellent place of beginning writers to learn how to write, so it is no surprise that many of the stories here seem crude, not yet "fleshed out" or given the appropriate lever of descriptive detail... Because the writer who wrote the story is often a beginning writer and not (yet) an accomplished writer. These beginning writers need encouragment and guidance to improve their story telling.
- the EA story contributors and not paid for any of their work
- places like the EA story library are an exellent place of beginning writers to learn how to write, so it is no surprise that many of the stories here seem crude, not yet "fleshed out" or given the appropriate lever of descriptive detail... Because the writer who wrote the story is often a beginning writer and not (yet) an accomplished writer. These beginning writers need encouragment and guidance to improve their story telling.