I must say that so far I've found this multi chapter story to be quite an enjoyable read. It is well written and draws you in. Hallmarks of a great author.

My thanks to the one who has penned it.

Once again this Potter adaption is tremendous. A fantastic effort by the author and it manages to carry all the feel and character of the original. Thanks for all the hard word writting this multi part story. I am sure there are many who have enjoyed it as much as I have.

I must say WOW. I am really enjoying the story so far and have been checking EA eagerly, searching for the newest chapters. Please don't leave this story unfinished Lord Wrackspurt, like many authors have with their stories...

Me again! what a fantastic story you have written. Savouring each chapter. Thanks so much for the time and trouble you have taken.

WOW, glad you like it. Chapter 30 is up now, it's one of my favorites. Working on editing the other chapters as classes & work allow me to. I've put stuff on some of the regular HP fanfiction sites and (under various pen-names on other sites) got told by the readers (who are mostly women) that it was too violent, and why all the terrible groin injuries, and it wasn't romantic enough, or even that it was badly written. I wasn't sure if an HP fic would fit in here even if the content was EA compliant.

Thanks again, let me know what you favorite parts are...

LW

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those last two chapters were amazing. I'm literally on the edge of my seat.

the gelding of Dean and Ron's death is just wow...

More...I demand more damnit XD I am seriously addicted to this story...

You are an awesome writer Lord Wrackspurt. Real talent. If you have any published books, lemme know and i will SO buy them X3

Not everyone is a Harry Potter fan. I think that unless there is a gelding/neutering/castration in every chapter, it's a waste of space for it being here. and in the end, I'd prefer it to be a Golden Eunuchorn. but that's just me.

@ Sanosuku: Thanks again, I guess I am being a bit of a tease, but yes, I am purposefully leaving it at cliff-hanger points where I can. But I am trying to put about 4 or 5 chapters up a week as I finish the final polishing edits for here. It is finished and will get put up unless I get hit by a bus or something unexpected happens. I’m not going to drag it out as I need to get this done before the end-of-semester papers & stuff come due and I am truly out of time to work on it.

@ Eunuchorn: Yeah, not everybody likes Harry Potter, but if you check out the book sales and movie receipts, as well as the traditional fan fiction sites, you’ll see that there are a shit load of people who do. And if you can write a novel length story with the same thing happening in every chapter (5k to 10k words per chapter), and have it actually make sense as a real story, or remain interesting to the reader, after the first three chapters then you’re a pretty good author.

Sanosuku (imported) wrote: Sat Oct 17, 2009 8:48 pm More...I demand more damnit XD I am seriously addicted to this story...

You are an awesome writer Lord Wrackspurt. Real talent. If you have any published books, lemme know and i will SO buy them

LOL! Wow, I got a fan!:) No, no books yet, maybe some day, but if you have ideas for the story (I'm still making changes and am open to new ideas, is there something you would like?), or you just want to talk about it, send me an email: [email protected]

Thanks for the good words...

LW

Lord Wrackspurt (imported) wrote: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:57 pm @ Eunuchorn: Yeah, not everybody likes Harry Potter, but if you check out the book sales and movie receipts, as well as the traditional fan fiction sites, you’ll see that there are a shit load of people who do. And if you can write a novel length story with the same thing happening in every chapter (5k to 10k words per chapter), and have it actually make sense as a real story, or remain interesting to the reader, after the first three chapters then you’re a pretty good author.

Oh, no doubt about it. the franchise is indeed wildly popular. I have passed it by mostly because it's fiction for kids, not adults. One thing that is missing, I think, is indeed the focus of this storyboard. One traditional aspect of wizardry is the neutering of the wizard to be. (at least in other storys) to prevent sexual thoughts from entering into the Wizard's spells. I don't think Rowling would address this idea at all, though it might be addressed here.

It's interesting about the storys here, because they are Here, you know what's going to happen, it's just a matter of how it is done. some violently, some painfully, some secretly, but nearly all the storys posted to the EA story boards have that one thing in common. I wonder if Harry himself will eventually be castrated in your storys here. I will certainly read that chapter if you post it.