http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/S/ea_04512stepfath.htm

I don't often comment on stories, because I get accused of being biased, you know!

This is a G/S/Bi/nullo/minor story. If you're familiar with the "Stepfather" series and translations, this is a reworked version of the first draft.

It's good, in that the boys sound like boys, and the dialogue isn't forced or cumbersome. If you liked this series, you'll enjoy this new visit to Jase's universe.

Five stars...er...scissors...

Sander,

Stepfather II is really good. Thanks for taking the time. As Paolo said, the dialogue is very natural. Writing natural-sounding dialogue is one of the more difficult things in writing a story. Beyond that, the story itself is hot...turning young, horny boys into sexless, nullified objects. Hope you continue to write.

There will be more of the Jase-Universe from this author, he tells me.

Paolo wrote: Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:02 pm There will be more of the Jase-Universe from this author, he tells me.

:)

Yay!

Always ready for another. I have to agree that Sander can sure write dialogue, and also, allow a reader to do that all-important task when reading a story like this; 'suspend disbelief'. This is a tricky thing to do, and the author does it well.

Encore!