Sissyboytony

Paolo added this note at the end of your Chapter 2: 'Editor's Note: No more of this story will be published until the Author finds a beta reader/spell checker.Paolo'

Send your chapters to me before you post them and I will beta read, spell check, and edit them for you.

azolderm4m @ cableone.net

I too should be prepared to help to lick this story into shape, but the author should be aware that my editing tends to be a bit on the heavy side.

I read the story with some trepidation in case it had borrowed too freely from the earlier part of "Simon and the Paedophile Ring". However, perhaps not. My story was not the first to make use of a step-mom or foster-mom obsessed by the idea of turning a little boy into a little girl, and it certainly won't be the last.

Paolo is quite correct in saying that the spelling is a bit idiosyncratic. I was intrigued when the family car is named as a pink "Doge Neon". Was it built in mediaeval Venice, maybe?

C van D

"Doge" is one the words that my spell checker (and my eyes) didn't catch.

Not to be rude, but if I hadn't been so interested in the story, I would have trashed it by the first paragraph.

I'm sorry folks, but 63 typos, and then some getting by, is just unreal.

And that was in the first half...

It's clear that no effort was made whatsoever to proofread this one, and after all, Open Office is free and so is a temporary version of Spell Check Anywhere.

Paolo wrote: Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:29 pm "Doge" is one the words that my spell checker (and my eyes) didn't catch.

Not to be rude, but if I hadn't been so interested in the story, I would have trashed it by the first paragraph.

I'm sorry folks, but 63 typos, and then some getting by, is just unreal.

And that was in the first half...

It's clear that no effort was made whatsoever to proofread this one, and after all, Open Office is free and so is a temporary version of Spell Check Anywhere.

Reading the story again, and quite apart from Paolo's comments about spelling and presentation, I'm concerned about the theme.

Not about turning a little boy into a little girl - we've covered that - but the story seems to relish sadism, and I don't think EA is into promoting THAT.

I also wonder if the author has been browsing the website "Sissybecky" which is an archive of stories about bringing up little boys as little girls. In these there is a common thread. All the boys get to be dressed in girls' clothes, and most, though not all, have male "bits" removed - surgically and without pain and trauma- to eliminate their testosterone source and make them more receptive to the idea of living as little girls from then on. Does this sound familiar?

C van D

hey guys sorry about the spelling but it is rough when you have basic computer. my mistrress is hard on me sorry. please give me a link to your email so i can send the final chapter so people can know what i went through

please accept mmy appologies I just wanted to tell my side of what happened, and I can't have some one else write it they would not understand the abuse I went through

thanks I could use your link to spell check and help arrange it right thanks and i appreciate it

p.s. you think I'm kididng about what happened to me? I changed my name and some minor issues but go to [B]www.demalesociety.com and go to demale manual # 23 i think and look for "greg completely demaled and that is me as a demaled boy several years after hormonal replacment and other mods. for legal reasons they do not mention the incest abuse or mods done to me.

I went thought the 3 day sign up process just to be able to post here and say that I loved the story!

It was hot, it was sexy, i came to it about a half dozen times.

I really don't care about super perfect spelling. It just nice to find someone writing hot, extreme stories.

Good girl, keep up the good work.