I'm in a great mood to make some fiction, but what little cleverness I have is failing me. I think a good story needs a large amount of cleverness, but that is far easier said than done.

My premise is quite simple. There is a guy who discovers that another guy has a bigger penis, so he decides to even the score. Most likely this is because his girlfriend blabbed that her previous boyfriend was better endowed, and that naturally stirred the jealously of her current boyfriend.

I'm quite pleased with that as a starting point. The problem is that I need a clever plan for the story to be fun. Straight-forward violence, such as if the smaller guy simply attacked the bigger guy, would be far too unrealistic to be of any value. I would much rather have an elaborate scheme, something that will greatly entertain any who hear of it.

Have you ever plotted to castrate someone for your own amusement? Can you imagine a scheme that allows you to safely remove another's manhood and even get away with it?

You might treat his underwear with some sort of poison. Maybe you could sneak up on him while he is sleeping, or drug him to force him to sleep while you work. Ideas such as these might work, but I think there are many much more clever ideas available.

Togadong (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:26 pm I'm in a great mood to make some fiction, but what little cleverness I have is failing me. I think a good story needs a large amount of cleverness, but that is far easier said than done.

My premise is quite simple. There is a guy who discovers that another guy has a bigger penis, so he decides to even the score. Most likely this is because his girlfriend blabbed that her previous boyfriend was better endowed, and that naturally stirred the jealously of her current boyfriend.

I'm quite pleased with that as a starting point. The problem is that I need a clever plan for the story to be fun. Straight-forward violence, such as if the smaller guy simply attacked the bigger guy, would be far too unrealistic to be of any value. I would much rather have an elaborate scheme, something that will greatly entertain any who hear of it.

Have you ever plotted to castrate someone for your own amusement? Can you imagine a scheme that allows you to safely remove another's manhood and even get away with it?

You might treat his underwear with some sort of poison. Maybe you could sneak up on him while he is sleeping, or drug him to force him to sleep while you work. Ideas such as these might work, but I think there are many much more clever ideas available.

Maybe he falls in love with a devious person who is conspiring with the main character to rid the world of the well endowed?

I always like when the stud is trick to put his cock in something that he thinks will feel good. Or maybe he wakes up and his cock is in some danger...

Tilt (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:55 am I always like when the stud is trick to put his cock in something that he thinks will feel good. Or maybe he wakes up and his cock is in some danger...

That sounds like great fun. What are some of your favorite stories that go like that?

I love the stories that are longer and more elaborate. The best stories set up its characters and elaborate the situation. The really great ones also include some sort of cleverness to really make it memorable. That sort of story is wonderful and precious, but they are quite well hidden in the sea of super-short quickie stories.

I know that I have read some impressively long and elaborate stories, but I haven't been able to remember any titles. The one that most easily comes to mind is one where a guy somehow has a genie to grant five wishes. He wishes for a big penis, the ability to instantly go anywhere in the world, the power to be invisible, and the power to stun people (also turning men into women in the process), and he saves the last wish for later. He uses his powers to rape people until one of them tricks him and traps him into getting his balls cut off. Then he uses his last wish to get them back and learns nothing.

The plot isn't as I would have written it, so I mostly forgot it and lost track of the title, but it stands out as being a seriously plot-heavy story with lots of cleverness. If anyone knows of other clever stories like that, please share!