I am quite surprised that nobody is posting more on this story as I feel that it is virtually the perfect penectomy tale. I have always had a keen interest in female-dominance ever since the age of 13 or 14. I dreamed of being taken prisoner by powerful, sexy women who would bring me to erection, masturbate me and then - right at the moment of climax - strike off my member in the blink of an eye. This story really 'ticks the boxes' so to speak.

1) The subjects are all unwilling men who are forced to undergo this process.

2) The cutters are all strong, partially dressed and beautiful young women.

3) The members are erect when they are removed and are ejaculating.

4) The severing of the member is swift and clean from a single stroke.

5) The women present are aroused by witnessing the ceremony.

I would very much like to read more stories like this from the author. I might suggest one that dealt with a man or group of men captured and enslaved by a community of amazon warrior-women. These men would either be used as breeding-stock or employed as penectomised slave-boys. The world of 'Xena - Warrior Princess' would be an ideal setting for such a tale, or perhaps a 'Mad Max 3 - Beyond Thunderdome' scenario would be more fitting. After all, I bet Aunty Entity didn't get where she was without wielding a blade...

I would be very interested to know what other readers thought of this story, and if anyone else has always had the Warrior Queen/Slave-Boy fantasy.

'ello, 'orrible -

Thanks for your interest in this story, and your endorsement! I seldom hit this particular Board forum but I was going to post today after a dream last night ... was wondering if "Story Reviews" was the right place to put it ... and recognized one of my older efforts in the title of your message.

I think I discovered at least as much pleasure writing "Machete Competition" as you did reading it. For other examples, you undoubtedly have searched the EA archives for other stories I wrote, either under the name "Finder" or under "Dfinder" (you may like the El Hani series). I go back to "Machete Competition" occasionally because it brings erotic pleasure each time ... even though I always know how it will turn out! This particular form of genital abuse does not punch everyone's erotic buttons, as you know, but I think (I hope, somewhat objectively) it's decently good writing and is appreciated by a few. Folks like Stewie69 and Coinflipper21 are quite into the scene; "Cock-Gambling in Vegas" in fact was originally a Coinflipper story that I expanded on.

Written appreciation of our substantial efforts, on this board, is regrettably slim, as Paolo and others have discovered. I do get private emails however from quite a few readers who enjoyed the "Vegas" story.

On to the dream ... seems I was back in college, in a creative writing class. The professor was an enigmatic and attractive older woman; perhaps I fantasized about a relationship. She assigned us to write a story, our choice of subject, no constraints. In the dream it seemed entirely appropriate for me to choose, as a story line, something with the recurrent penectomy (emasculation) theme as evidenced in all my EA stories; not only would it be enjoyable to write, but - (this feeling came through strongly in the dream) - there was a deeper pleasure in knowing that she would be compelled to read it. And, although she would be grading it on its creative and literary merits, she could not avoid fully understanding, from a woman's point of view, the events portrayed in the story - a woman's role and relationship with a (doomed) penis - observing its erections, bringing about a final ejaculation, and at that crucial moment, its removal by some means. Writing all this into the story, for her to read, seemed an utterly simple and natural decision.

It didn't go much farther than that; I awoke soon after with a rigid morning erection and the sweet lingering aftertaste of a rare erotic dream.

It made me appreciate in a new way what a remarkable forum EA has been for me and many others; here we are free to write anything that reflects our deepest, darkest erotic desires with (almost) no constraints whatsoever. Without EA, I would still feel compelled to write, but the only reader would be me. Deep and sincere thanks to EA and all its contributors and supporters!

Finder

I had forgotten all abou this story, had to go back and read it again. Very good tale indeed.