Well written. Believable. My type of story. Thanks for sharing.

unencumbered (imported) wrote: Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:25 pm Well written. Believable. My type of story. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you. That's a very nice compliment. I have another couple of stories in the pipe-line. Just have to run them past my editor/wife () before submission to the powers that be. And while I'm at it I'd like to thank Paolo for his suggestions about punctuation.

All the best

Riven

Hi Riven!

Not that I am the big writer but I would also love to read more.

Greetings

John