A well-writen story. Thanks for writing it. Hopefully it will have other parts to it. I hope that the author continues this story. It is an interesting reality where guys have this game to play. Also, the concept of the game is interesting to read. Definitely write more. Thanks again.

A very well written story and a good plot line for future installments. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.

For sure, this is great concept and great story. Please keep it up!

Chapter after chapter of guys losing so-many percent would, of course, become repetitious. But there are plenty of related plots you could develop, such as:

- ways of attracting more players.

- what happens as parents, teachers, and others discover boys with

partial or missing packages.

- what happens as others find out about the game.

- whether there's a comparable game for girls.

- what might entice adults to play the game, and what results ensue.

FWIW, I would've had the machine take one ball after maybe the fifth loss, and the other after about the tenth loss. The sequence would then be 10%, 20% 30%, 40%, one ball, 50%, 60%, 70%, 80%, other ball, 90%, 100%. But it's your story; you should do what you want.

If you want to preserve some level of masculinity, you could have the machine push the balls back up inside, seal the abdominal wall, and then remove only the scrotum.

Anyone who wants to can write their own story in the "Strip Poker" universe as long as they do not use any of my characters. They can set it in another town and make the rules different if they want to.

I have this fantasy about playing strip poker or games of chance and being the loser when someone else has set the consequences. Anyone had this experience? I was talked into playing when a kid with several older boys. In the end they all fucked me. I'd like to do it again but I know you might have more "advanced" consequences. Have you had a bad experience at this? Is this too dangerous with fellow members of this site? Anybody interested? Should I put this fantasy back into the closet? I'm submissive and fantasize about being helpless in a situation. Right now I'm pretty sure I want to try it unless you think I shouldn't. Please advise.

Maybe someone, who does more programming than I do, could write a Strip Poker computer game that incorporates the rules of the story and keeps track of how much the player has lost. I know I would like to play such a game. There might be a freeware poker game with source code that would not be too dificult to modify.

Would you like to play such a game?

Does anyone volunteer to write the game?

I have started writing a sequel to this story. Does anyone have any suggestions of what I should do in this part? Speak now or forever hold your dick (if you have one).

Thank you for part 2 - really enjoyed it

Just read Part 2. I really enjoyed reading it. Too bad there wasn't this type of law when I was growing up.

gandalf (imported) wrote: Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:52 pm Just read Part 2. I really enjoyed reading it. Too bad there wasn't this type of law when I was growing up.

Which law do you mean? Was it the law allowing boys boys 13 and over to play strip poker or the law allowing anyone over 13 to have sex with any consenting person over 13?

I submitted part 3 about an hour ago. Part 4 is almost ready. I will submit it soon.