This is a good story but I think it would have been better if jearns85 had included scenes in which Ryan and Rod had tried to masturbate with their stumps. He should have also had them get blow jobs with their stumps. Can they cum either way? If they can, how long does it take. How difficult is it? How does it feel compared to how it felt when they had complete penises?
I would like to read a prequel to this story that takes place when the swim team first started doing penectomies. I know it is sometimes difficult to start at the beginning but it can result in better stories.
The url for this story is:
http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/S/ea_210214a_swimmi.htm
"A Swimming Penectomy" By: jearns85
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Re: "A Swimming Penectomy" By: jearns85
Agreed, good story, but I too would like to see the origins.
Perhaps the coach could discover a temple pool or hidden spring inhabited by Adonis or Hermes, and swimming that pool could transform someone into the smoothest, sleekest swimmer in the world, although one aspect of that sleekness would be nullification.
What if the coach didn't warn the swimmers? What would they think when seeing each other null for the first time? What if they had to compete nude in order to benefit from the effect? How would the rest of the school, or the general public, react?
Perhaps the coach could discover a temple pool or hidden spring inhabited by Adonis or Hermes, and swimming that pool could transform someone into the smoothest, sleekest swimmer in the world, although one aspect of that sleekness would be nullification.
What if the coach didn't warn the swimmers? What would they think when seeing each other null for the first time? What if they had to compete nude in order to benefit from the effect? How would the rest of the school, or the general public, react?