Nice! You are off to a good start, fluent and clear, olive oil is a nice touch. Please keep writing, as slave returns to submit.

Especially good that the slave boy's thin little dick has trouble getting hard, and his gonads are so small compared to the Master.

Would like to read that slave boy is trained to wipe Master's ass with his tongue. Slave boy small dick, nuts, and butthole punished as he resists, learns but makes mistakes, then accepts that role.

Also, it would be a plus to see the small thin little dick of the slave tortured into impotence. Any time the slave tries to have a boner with his little dick, Master would torture it to teach slave to keep it limp. Slave could be fed Viagra to entice hard-on and prolong the torture. Nuts to follow.

Nice to see him moving along! Having slave serve as an asswipe, and little dick and nuts tortured would be great.

I rarely find much in erotica that speaks to me but in this case I enjoyed the story very much. I was further delighted to find part two posted this morning, thank you.

i am an aspiring slave boi and would love to reda this story but cant find it - can You help me Master?

You can look in the stories section (http://www.eunuch.org/main/index.php?special=stories) and there's an alphabetical index of titles on the right hand side.

Or to go directly Master's New Boy (Part 1) (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/M/ea_134210master_s.htm) and (Part 2) (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/M/ea_211733master_s.htm).