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"This Is It"- Feedback please
Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:10 pm
by dedicked (imported)
Anyone got any feedback on the story I wrote "This Is It" or suggestions for a sequel or follow up?
Re: "This Is It"- Feedback please
Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 5:23 pm
by Ernie of Maine (imported)

"This Is It" I liked your story and your style but disappointed with the ending:dong::-\__Ernie of Maine____;)
Re: "This Is It"- Feedback please
Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 5:40 pm
by dedicked (imported)
oh why dissapointed?
Re: "This Is It"- Feedback please
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 12:15 pm
by blondboy (imported)
I thought that it was a well-done first story. I look forward to reading more from you. The only suggestion to make the story better that I could come up with was if the story had continued a little more and we had read about the main character's adjustment to not having a dick (Does he learn to enjoy it? What do others say? etc). Thanks for your story and best of luck on future ones.