Amateur Night

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vorpalboy (imported)
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Amateur Night

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I really enjoyed this story! Clever and well written, and the idea of guys volunteering to be cut, in public, in any of a variety of creative ways, is so very cool.

Thanks for sharing this!
Allen (imported)
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Rob-

As always with your writing, this story is very stimulating. They always make my crotch expand. Thanks so much. I also like the idea that it is open ended and leaves room for additional visits to this club. Hope you share some more of them with us.
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While the story could have been developed a bit more, especially with respect to the victims and their motivations, I liked it very much. I chose to have my own nuts removed in a scene. It was a small one with 4 other guys (friends) present, but I felt it would be so much better to lose them to the enjoyment of others. I must admit that I almost lost my nerve as the procedure began. I'm nonetheless stuck it through and am glad. We can only lose them once, and I feel better having done it in a social setting.
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