Mr. Savage by Dewi

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Paolo
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Mr. Savage by Dewi

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This story really makes you wonder.

Now, think of it this way : you're a nice looking young man, sexually active a bit, and life's just grand. Then you find something wrong "down there." Without giving the story away, but of course we KNOW since it's an EA story that SOMETHING has to go, you find yourself placed in the hands of a urologist to fix your dilemma.

What if? What if the surgeon isn't exactly moral? You're young and hot and he's just the type to take a bit of ... well, you'll just have to read it and hope you don't have to go in for an exam too soon afterwards!

Well done, Dewi.

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Re: Mr. Savage by Dewi

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Thank you Paolo

I am glad to get some feed back on my story. It is the first I have written for EA and I was not sure how suitable the subject matter was.

Your review was excellent telling enough of the story to make some one want to read it without telling too much.

I have started chatting in the EA chat room trying to get ideas for another story. There are some interesting and nice guys chatting there, I would recormmend it to all.

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Re: Mr. Savage by Dewi

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I also thought that this story and the new one , "Dark Continent," were both very well done. "Mr. Savage" was as thought-provoking as it was erotic, and the twist at the end of "Dark Continent" was fantastic! Great job.
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Re: Mr. Savage by Dewi

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Yes, if you liked Dr. Savage in the first story, read on with Dewi's latest. The good Dr. makes another appearance!

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