Cyndigurl45 (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:10 pm Great chapter 10 took me totally by surprise, but you just can't let Alex die, I say one of "boys" has got to take on a more femine appearance, every group of lost boys needs a mother (Wendy) to read bed time stories you know, maybe Alex his brokn ribs have to be removed his one ball damaged he begins to take on a femine mind set and apperance, just an idea

Thanks for your nice review, pal. And thanks for taking the time to write it. I really, really do appreciate it.

So you think every group of boys needs a mother, huh? Um... I'll have to think about that some more

But whatever happens in the next chapters, thanks again pal...

Take good care: Loverboy.

Cyndigurl45 (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:10 pm Great chapter 10 took me totally by surprise, but you just can't let Alex die, I say one of "boys" has got to take on a more femine appearance, every group of lost boys needs a mother (Wendy) to read bed time stories you know, maybe Alex his brokn ribs have to be removed his one ball damaged he begins to take on a femine mind set and apperance, just an idea

I don't think so. Alex is gay, but his character was still male during the whole story. Anyway its a decision of the author whats happening to Alex in future.

I've commented in your story before.... and.... I still really really love it.. Pleaseeeeee. continue.....

Love, martin

martin_berge45 (imported) wrote: Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:40 am I've commented in your story before.... and.... I still really really love it.. Pleaseeeeee. continue.....

Love, martin

Thank you my friend for your comment I really do appreciate.

It's very gratifying to get encouragements like yours. Encouragements give me the energy I need to continue writing the story. It was very nice of you to tell me you still love reading my story. So again, thanks pal...

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:24 pm Take good care:

Loverboy

:dong::dong::dong: quality story,great compassionate characters,can t wait for more.definately 4 :dong:out of 4

Just read Chapter 11

another great story

thank you

please keep writing

11 well done, I see a rib is gone, yes everyone needs a mother, I suppose he being gay to start might play a part but I am gay and enjoy expressing my femine side

Have read Chapter 11. I am definitely glad everything has turned out o.k. for Ales...so far. I can see in the story the love, compassion,and feelings for others that are apparent in Peter's handling of the soldier who did so much bad. I imagine that nothing was said about the decapitated soldier (by Jason)

because of the soldier(s) being in the wrong. I'm am wondering if the soldier Will (I think is the name) who did not participate in the assault will ultimately want to join the conclave at the Island.

Outstanding story. Thinking of printing it off as it goes to have to read anytime. (Have to get new ink cartridges before I can do that).

limpdick (imported) wrote: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:53 am :dong::dong::dong: quality story,great compassionate characters,can t wait for more.definately 4 :dong:out of 4

Thank you so much for your encouragement. At this point of the story, I needed encouragements like yours to go on and keep writing the story. Thank you so much...

Take care dude...

Loverboy

bella (imported) wrote: Thu Apr 09, 2009 9:11 am Just read Chapter 11

another great story

thank you

please keep writing

Thanks a lot for your comment Yes... I will keep writing the story. Comments like yours have convinced me. Thanks again.

Take good care...

Loverboy