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Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:18 pm
by Paolo
I'll see about pulling down the new story index box, since it's causing so much trauma to everyone.

Next, I'll amend the rules for stories to be "one-shot" only, less than 5k words.

By the time I add grammar and theme rules to them, I'd say you'll see about 1 story per week. That should make it nice and easy to keep up with.

Let's see, ban Thecia, C van D, me, anyone Anon., Sander, Slammr, Pueros, Bagoas, Nathan...

I'd say this problem is solved.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:35 pm
by Old Greebo (imported)
Aw c'mon Paolo!

Surely no-one's suggesting bannings or radical closing-down of the New Stories feed.

But you've got to admit there's been a bit of a problem recently?

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:47 pm
by Paolo
What shows up in the new stories box is what has been submitted and what has been accepted. It shows the most recent 10 postings.

I only have control over what gets trashed. I post those which qualify.

My suggestion is that if you don't like the box, use the story index page:

You even get tags.

If you don't like serials, don't read stories that say "My Story - Part 1".

If you don't like translations, don't read stories that say "French" or "German" in the title.

This whole line had no business in this topic, either. It should have been a new thread in itself.

That's just what we needed - a good mystery/suspense serial comes along that you can actually read, one that provokes deep thoughts over the content, and then someone starts griping about serials and the story feeds in the middle of the feedback for it. Feedback, which in itself is nothing short of a miracle.

Thanks.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:37 am
by Paolo
Open again due to board crash, seeing as how mine and A-1's rousing discussion was lost in the VB upgrade debacle.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:44 am
by A-1 (imported)
Well,

Let me re-iterate, then. Scotty is in the bag in episode 15. If he remains in the BAG, unconscious, tied, he will suffocate. Benny is not worrying about him because if his friend lives or dies is no longer of any consequence because he is in the grip of Stockholm Syndrome, not to mention his mother and Mr. Poore his father who will have him castrated, if not chemically then surgically. He believes right now judging from his behavior that the secret, abusive society that has castrated him already, maybe permanently, must be preserved and he cares nothing if his friend's life is taken as a price.

I want to bring up the conjecture that underdeveloped genitalia will NOT generate as intense feelings as will genitalia that is normally developed. The fact that Benny is getting so much feelings from anal penetration owe to this fact. Canyon notwithstanding...

So, then, how does that make Mr. Poore any different form John Wayne Gacy or Jeffrey Dahlmer. At least "Mommie Dearest" has not killed him yet, just chemically maimed him, possibly for life, because that hormonal castration causes testicular atrophy.

Answer, this is C-R-A-Z-Y. These people are either criminals or hovering on the edge of criminality.

Behavioral analysis reveals these folks all to be sociopathic, otherwise they would not have knocked Scotty out and put him in the bag or tied people up to insure that they did not reveal any "SECRETS" until they were caught in the abusive grip of this underground society.

The MASSIVE sado-masochistic cycle here is one that molests children, indoctrinates them into abusive adults and insures that the cycle is passed on from generation to generation.

General psychiatriac information on T
A-1 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:10 am he Stockholm Syndrome (http://www.mental-health-matters.com/in ... cle&id=167)
applies DIRECTLY to this story, as does ABUSE
tag&task=tag&tag=abuse) and finally, don't try to hide these monsters behind the label of MENTAL ILLNESS
377:the-myth-of-mental-illness&catid=41:stigma&Itemid=1642), either.

This is the most horrible of HORROR stories because the monsters are REAL and they most definately exist, even if they are generally NOT this well organized.

COMMENT ON, MY FRIENDS...

WRITER, PLEASE KEEP UP THE STORY UNTIL YOU FINISH IT...

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 12:01 pm
by Paolo
I should have saved that reply I wrote.

(sigh)

Abuse with malice, or abuse with love (if you call it that) is still abuse - or is it?

Therein lies the conundrum, since 'our hero' doesn't think he's being abused. He's become convinced that his life has just taken a turn for the better.

It's now come down to -"it's me or him"- as far as Scott goes, and I'd say that Ben isn't going to come charging to his friend's rescue.

But you're right, that what makes this story so frightening. Mr. P. knows what kinds of boys to target, and how to 'assimilate' them. It will be interesting to see how he solves the Scott-problem, since they all blew it on that one.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 11:34 pm
by A-1 (imported)
Paolo wrote: Tue Jan 19, 2010 12:01 pm I should have saved that reply I wrote.

(sigh)

Abuse with malice, or abuse with love (if you call it that) is still abuse - or is it?

Therein lies the conundrum, since 'our hero' doesn't think he's being abused. He's become convinced that his life has just taken a turn for the better.

It's now come down to -"it's me or him"- as far as Scott goes, and I'd say that Ben isn't going to come charging to his friend's rescue.

But you're right, that what makes this story so frightening. Mr. P. knows what kinds of boys to target, and how to 'assimilate' them. It will be interesting to see how he solves the Scott-problem, since they all blew it on that one.

We see in episode 16 how the "Scotty problem" is "solved" while Benny falls further into the abyss with an abyssmal Ass-fucking from his very own "daddy".

Watch for the lobotomy on Scotty next. Shades of MANCHURIAN CANDIDATE, if you can create an assassin, then why can't you turn a 'normal' boy into a sex-hungry, fiend who craves taking it up the ass? If you believe in movies like "The Bourne Ultimatum" then you can believe that somebody can be "programmed" to be Gay.

You know, those folk that claim that nature and not nurture causes GAYNESS are in a LOT of trouble if they believe the premise of this RATSHIT "The New Neighbor Boy" story series.

I mean, if you can indeed make a straight boy Gay, then you should be able to make a Gay boy straight by psychological programming. The logic of this whole series is ill-concieved and nightmarish in its suppositions.

But worst of all, it makes a hellishly STRONG argument against those who claim that Gayness is INBORN and not LEARNED.

On the other hand, if Gayness IS inborn then where is the RIGHTEOUS OUTRAGE that this ASSHOLE Mr. Poore is targeting Gay boys for ABUSE and avoiding "straight" boys?

I mean, don't people who are as some believe, destined to be Gay, have the RIGHT to live their youth UNMOLESTED by GAY old men?

Where is the OUTRAGE of this community? WHERE IS IT? Have you all NO HUMANITY, or are you just lusting for and fantasizing for GAY adolescent flesh? Or worse yet, are you lusting for pre-pubesent flesh that you want to see castrated so that they can become Gay slaves craving anal penetration for sexual fufillment, while having limp or even no penises to fulfill their own needs?

Isn't it about time some of you THOUGHT THESE ISSUES THROUGH without being under the influence of a washtub full of lust and a hard pecker?

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:14 am
by YourPhriendlyAuthor (imported)
A-1 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:44 am Let me re-iterate, then. Scotty is in the bag in episode 15. If he remains in the BAG, unconscious, tied, he will suffocate. Benny is not worrying about him because if his friend lives or dies is no longer of any consequence because he is in the grip of Stockholm Syndrome, not to mention his mother and Mr. Poore his father who will have him castrated, if not chemically then surgically. He believes right now judging from his behavior that the secret, abusive society that has castrated him already, maybe permanently, must be preserved and he cares nothing if his friend's life is taken as a price.

I want to bring up the conjecture that underdeveloped genitalia will NOT generate as intense feelings as will genitalia that is normally developed. The fact that Benny is getting so much feelings from anal penetration owe to this fact. Canyon notwithstanding...

So, then, how does that make Mr. Poore any different form John Wayne Gacy or Jeffrey Dahlmer. At least "Mommie Dearest" has not killed him yet, just chemically maimed him, possibly for life, because that hormonal castration causes testicular atrophy.

Answer, this is C-R-A-Z-Y. These people are either criminals or hovering on the edge of criminality.

Behavioral analysis reveals these folks all to be sociopathic, otherwise they would not have knocked Scotty out and put him in the bag or tied people up to insure that they did not reveal any "SECRETS" until they were caught in the abusive grip of this underground society.

The MASSIVE sado-masochistic cycle here is one that molests children, indoctrinates them into abusive adults and insures that the cycle is passed on from generation to generation.

General psychiatriac information on T
A-1 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:10 am he Stockholm Syndrome (http://www.mental-health-matters.com/index.ph
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A-1 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:44 am of MENTAL ILLNESS
377:the-myth-of-mental-illness&catid=41:stigma&Itemid=1642), either.

This is the most horrible of HORROR stories because the monsters are REAL and they most
definately exist, even if they are generally NOT this well organized.

COMMENT ON, MY FRIENDS...

WRITER, PLEASE KEEP UP THE STORY UNTIL YOU FINISH IT...

A-1,

You missed one *huge* point: cult programming.

I'm not sure if I'd call Mr. Poore, Dr. Kent, Joe, et. al. 'sociopathic'; I think it would be more accurate to say that when they were young, *they* were subjected to the *same* kind of programming that Canyon, Jeffie, Bobbie, and now Benny have undergone. Cults *require* constant proselytization in order to flourish; the techniques that Poore and friends have been using are *exactly* the kind of tactics that cults use to break down novices' resistance and indoctrinate them!

Note that most of the boys were victims of abuse in one way or another; cults go for people like that, too! The victims are shown a caring, loving atmosphere at first, then gradually break down their resistance. We've seen that in this story; The boys were shown porn, then *gay* porn, then introduced to gay sex, etc.

*Creating* Stockholm Syndrome is part of the indoctrination process; the victim is conditioned to believe what their captors *want* them to believe! There are some differences, but essentially, it's quite similar.

Assuming that this *is* a 'cult', I'm wondering how it got started - there's already been more than a few references to the Greek tradition of pederasty - and if there's a hierarchy to the organization. Again, Poore had 'connections' that allowed him to find Benny, so it's entirely possible that this is a widespread organization!

It'll be interesting to see where this goes from here!!!

-YPA

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:34 pm
by Paolo
A-1 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 19, 2010 11:34 pm You know, those folk that claim that nature and not nurture causes GAYNESS are in a LOT of trouble if they believe the premise of this RATSHIT "The New Neighbor Boy" story series.

Anyone who believes ANYTHING they read in the FICTION archive here deserves to be in a lot of trouble.

Also, I don't think the majority of story readers are here for the stimulating themes and deeper meaning of the stories. (Sad as that may be.) I doubt if many of them appreciate the things like Stockholm Syndrome and brainwashing and cult-like influences going on this tale.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 2:04 pm
by Old Greebo (imported)
You're all talking as though New Neighbour Boy is real life.

It's a story. It's a figment in the imagination of the Anon who wrote it.

At least, that's what it is until the Anon comes forward and declares that the story, or any part of it, is based on some true life situation or incident that he (or she?) knows of.

But Anon hasn't yet come forward and come clean. So none of the prior discussion in this thread has any logical or sensible basis.

Except --- well, yes it does, in a way. It gives us an insight into the minds of those of you who have been bothering to read the story.

But yes, OK, I admit I've been reading it too. Sort of. Out of curiosity. And that's in spite of my preference for the single-episode stories, which get crowded out of the new-stories feed by stories of this ilk.

I did read episodes 1 to 4, then I got bored with it and sort of skimmed through 5 to 14 in the hope of finding some proper characterisation of the people in the story. I found little. A number of new characters were added, but without anything being said that enabled me to say 'yes, I can understand where that guy is coming from'.

I would really like this Anon bloke to identify himself/herself in this thread. It would be very interesting to be able to question him/her.

If the tale has no basis in real life, then IMHO the story says far more about the state of mind of the author than it says about the characters he/she had attempted to portray.