Vargungarna (imported) wrote: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:42 am Greetings from Sweden Loverboy =)
First id really like to start of with to say congratulations to you, you have done a thing that so many ppl have failed to do, and that is to capture my complete intrest in a story and that my dear friend hasnt happend many times in my life =).
Mainly i like short stories, you might say stories that really hits the punch at the same time that i starts to find it boring. but in your case you always keep my intrest up and my usual boring novel reading side up. this might seem strange but i kinda like the way ur writting the story, its kinda a sex story/ life time reality story about how impossible/none impossible love/desires can be. does that make any sence to anyone or am i the only one thinking this?
anyways i keep finding parts about my self in this story in all chars, Squirt is me how i was back in those days, Jason is the friend i was willing to sacrifise everything to be with (i think that we all have had one of those friends, male or female) And finally the senator thats me today so to me this story somehow completly shows how i am irl and that to me was kinda funny.
im not reading this story cause of the sex part im reading it cause its always intresting and i like the way ourcharming little devil Squirt makes things happen and he always finds ways to do it somehow. lol brings back so many memories how i used to get ppl to do my dirty bidding as a horny preteen^^.
Loverboy i would deffo say with a bith of more work (witch i might add ur doing great so far really)id say this is a story that i deffo could see my self buyin if you ever turned it into a book, i think the world needs a few books like this. Cause i think that body modification is something that the world needs to see more off i think the modern world todaylike to hide things that doesnt really fit into our gray normal working lifes.
im sry i just noticed im splitting up the things i wanna say to you loverboyplz let me know if i can have this honor
take care all and ty for this lovly page
*hugs* Virre
Hey my friend...
Thanks a lot for your comments. I really did appreciate them. I'm telling you... comments like yours really keep me going. Many people have no idea of how long it takes to write a story... but from your comments I see that you already know all of that. Some readers sent me private messages from the site. I don't know how they do that... but I answer each one of them and they are not published anywhere. So if you can send me such a private message, I will answer it and tell you at what email address you can contact me...
In the meantime, take good care my friend...
Loverboy.
