I was just passing the site and happened to read your story. I think your idea of white males’ becoming slaves was really great. Your critics seem to have a problem because it is based on race. Perhaps they need to learn the difference between fantasy and reality.

I certainly hope their critism will not prevent you from trying another one. How about a powerful black female feminist group takes over America and decide to enslave all the white males as pay back.

Your story is wonderful! When can we expect the next part?

I did like the story!! the only thing is that I find Dennis accepts to quicly his fate. If you carry on the story, he should still feel humiliated.

kristoff wrote: Sun Dec 28, 2008 8:36 pm To respond bluntly, the title in itself turns me off, and I haven't bothered to read it, and am not likely to. To me the title suggests a tasteless topic. My opinion....

Wow, give the poor guy a break. Wouldn't a simple, i don't care for the title do. geez

Such is the risk of asking for feedback.

While you can't assume your work sucked because of lack thereof, when you ask, you'd better be ready for the opinions you're going to get.

Black, schmack!

...just nut the HONKEY bastards!

Hi A-1,

I loved your posting on my site. It was great!!!!

I love the story, it is a true Dom/Sub fantasy. and everyone needs to see it that way. IT IS OK TO FANTASIZE PEOPLE!!!

I read the story and thought it was done fairly well...looking forward to further episodes. then i ordered Robert Heinlein's book on the subject and look forward to the read. finally, i personally would not mind making my reparations and serving a Black Master as His slave boy. my ancestors owned black slaves in Virginia from about 1670 to 1900. i want to get castrated before i become a slave anyway. my collarspace handle is "phallusworship" and my recon handle is "bobby good head"...bobbilee