bella (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 24, 2009 2:15 pm Only 4 comments on chapter 13!

I am sure "Loverboy" needs more encouragement to write

Yep, Not only that he needs it, he deserves it...

some parts of his story were that personal to me, that I took a long time to pass them. I have only finished 9 parts and I feel happy to have some in reserve.

The way he is writing, I might be willing to become his slave, only to get a good friend as he is.

Loverboy I love your stories, they are great, please keep them (us) coming.

I have a good idea for the both of us.....from "the Malaysian Reserve"

A beautiful tropical island called Pulau Gemia, also known as Gem Island, off the coast of Terengganu is up for sale for a cool USD6million (RM21,79million)

The island is home to the Gem Island Resort & Spa which has been operating there for more than 10 years.

It is learnt that the owner of the 3.5ha island has appointed consultancy firm Romona International Sdn Bhd to execute the sale.

Gem Island is a private island where access is not permitted without granted approval. It is about the closest island with top class retreat facilities off the east coast of Peninsular Malaysia

I only have about 2,5 million, that will not do. But maybe if we change Peninsular Malaysia into Penis-nular Malaysia they are willing to help a little

loveUall

Jean

Dear Loverboy,

Today I finished part 10 , 11 and 12 They were GREAT, Thanks

I liked the comments at the end of the stories. I guess at the end of part 10 you were lying to us for the first time. You didn't need a brake to keep us waiting, making us hungry for the next part.

I have the feeling that the story got you completely, and writing Jason with Alex in his arms in one blow from the private beach to their home.....

Tell us, who was more exhausted, Jason or you???

Yep, and I did like part 12 with less sex. The comment at the end,......... about you. Maybe you don't realise, but you told me the same in part one as Alex also bought Squirt.

Oh the sex is great, don't worry. But I ain't looking for the sex, I want.......

loveU

Jean

bella (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 24, 2009 2:15 pm Only 4 comments on chapter 13!

I am sure "Loverboy" needs more encouragement to write

Yeah... I didn't get many reviews and I feel bad about it. I've posted chapter 14 and if I don't get more reviews on that one, well, I will understand that people no longer have interest in my story. So we'll see. But thanks pal for taking the time to write your comment. I really do appreciate...

Take good care pal...

Jean Op den Kamp (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 24, 2009 4:31 pm Yep, Not only that he needs it, he deserves it...

some parts of his story were that personal to me, that I took a long time to pass them. I have only finished 9 parts and I feel happy to have some in reserve.

The way he is writing, I might be willing to become his slave, only to get a good friend as he is.

Loverboy I love your stories, they are great, please keep them (us) coming.

I have a good idea for the both of us.....from "the Malaysian Reserve"

A beautiful tropical island called Pulau Gemia, also known as Gem Island, off the coast of Terengganu is up for sale for a cool USD6million (RM21,79million)

The island is home to the Gem Island Resort & Spa which has been operating there for more than 10 years.

It is learnt that the owner of the 3.5ha island has appointed consultancy firm Romona International Sdn Bhd to execute the sale.

Gem Island is a private island where access is not permitted without granted approval. It is about the closest island with top class retreat facilities off the east coast of Peninsular Malaysia

I only have about 2,5 million, that will not do. But maybe if we change Peninsular Malaysia into Penis-nular Malaysia they are willing to help a little

loveUall

Jean

Thanks a lot pal for your nice comment.

An island off the coast of Malaysia? And it's for sale for only 6 million US dollars? WOW. That's a real bargain. I have $25 in my bank account (LOL), so maybe I could make a deposit...

As much as I would love to own such a beautiful island, I'm very much afraid I can't afford it! But then we can dream, can't we? And the nice thing about dreaming is that it's free. It doesn't cost anything. So let's keep dreaming. As long as we keep dreaming, we're very much alive.

Again, thanks for your comment. I really do appreciate...

Thanks for Chapter 14

great again

more twists and turns

-- hope you get more comments as I would like more!

bella (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:14 am Thanks for Chapter 14

great again

more twists and turns

-- hope you get more comments as I would like more!

Hey my friend...

Thanks for your review. I really, really do appreciate. I'm glad that you liked chapter 14. I will certainly write chapter 15 as I would never let you down just like that. But then chapter 15 just might be the last chapter of my story. We'll see about that. I feel a little sad about that as I still had a few "ideas"... but then if the readers are no longer there, why should I keep spending time on writing that story...

I'm sure you understand.

So again, thanks a lot pal

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:05 am ... and take good care.

Loverboy

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 28, 2009 9:32 am Hey my friend...

Thanks for your review. I really, really do appreciate. I'm glad that you liked chapter 14. I will certainly write chapter 15 as I would never let you down just like that. But then chapter 15 just might be the last chapter of my story. We'll see about that. I feel a little sad about that as I still had a few "ideas"... but then if the readers are no longer there, why should I keep spending time on writing that story...

I'm sure you understand.

So again, thanks a lot pal

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:05 am ... and take good care.

Loverboy

Look at the number at the bottom of your posted story - lower left. That is the number of viewings of any particular story or chapter. I suspect your readers are there, they just may not feel the need to respond to every episode.

kristoff wrote: Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:04 am Look at the number at the bottom of your posted story - lower left. That is the number of viewings of any particular story or chapter. I suspect your readers are there, they just may not feel the need to respond to every episode.

Oh WOW. I had no idea that that number represent

kristoff wrote: Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:04 am s the number of viewings of any particular story.

Thanks A LOT Kristoff for telling me that. I love you pal. Thanks

As soon as I read your message, I went to check those numbers at the end of each of my chapters and indeed... I can see that the readers are still there. I feel much better now because really, I was feeling bad

As you know, it takes a lot of time to write those chapters due to the fact that English is not my first language. Once I'm finished writing a chapter, I read it twice, to make sure I haven't made errors. And even after that, I know that I haven't caught all my errors. But I really do my best, out of respect for the readers.

So yeah... I'm very encouraged by this information that you brought to my attention. Again:

If you were here in Montréal... I'd pay you a beer. Even two

Take good care my friend!

Loverboy

Have just read Chapter 14. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Plenty of "action" and good things done. Will be anxiously waiting for Chapter 15. I hope Greg's Dad does not mind how his son is developing. Leave it to Squirt to lend a helping hand.

gandalf (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:52 am Have just read Chapter 14. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Plenty of "action" and good things done. Will be anxiously waiting for Chapter 15. I hope Greg's Dad does not mind how his son is developing. Leave it to Squirt to lend a helping hand.

Hey Gandalf...

Thanks for your review . You're always there for me, and I really do appreciate.

Oh yes...Greg is in good hands with Squirt Ha Ha ha. I wouldn't put that little devil in the Vatican cause I think even the Pope would defrock. But now that I think of it... maybe I should send him to Rome . As I'm Catholic I shouldn't say that... but I do as I know that Jesus is on my side (the real one...).

I do hope you will like chapter 15. Now that I know that there are a lot of people out there that are still reading my story... I don't intend to put an end to it right now. But the next chapter will be an important one...

So again, thanks Gandalf.

Loverboy