Just read Ch 13..... another good read -- and another interesting twist. I'm now eagerly awaiting Ch 14 to see how the latest plot threads turn out.

Just read part 13. You did a very good work again.

I attended the thanks of Alex for Jason's help. But I was really woundering, that Jason got half of the island. I expected somwhat in that direction, but not that.

Another surprise was that Wiliam, Peter's assistant was set free.

At the chapel I thought about a very little one, like those you may find in castles all over Europe. You brought some windows from a cathredral in Paris in. Another surprise for me.

I expected that Peter had something in his mind with Henry. And if I read the eralier chapters, there was something in that brought it to that point. And you can still increase the Peter - Henry - relationship.

Squirt that little devil is teaching Will now, that typical squirt.

What can we attend in future chapters?

The marriage of Alex and Jason - no question, the only question is, if you do it just in the next chapter - normally you don't do that

Peter and Henry: First Henry must be nulliefied, that was the jugdement. What will that mean to thier relationship? Will Peter do it himself?

Will and Squirt: With the character of Squirt nearly everthing ist possible. By the way, what will be Squirt's gift at the marriage?

Willam: How will he do as a free man? You mentioned, that the others slaves at the island will look very close at Willams life.

You finished some storielines and you opened new line. You still keep everthing interesting. An now everyone can see how important the "transtion" chapter 12 was.

Stefan (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:55 am Again I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter

- but take all the time you need to give us a great story again.

Thank you for the last chapter.

Thanks a lot for your nice review pal...

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:40 am I'm so glad you liked chapter 1

3. Oh... and stay tuned for chapter 14 because it's going to be a "hot" one. Ha Ha Ha.

Again, thanks. And take good care pal...

Loverboy.

Really enjoyed Chapter 13

Thanks again

Stefan (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:33 am Just read part 13. You did a very good work again.

I attended the thanks of Alex for Jason's help. But I was really woundering, that Jason got half of the island. I expected somwhat in that direction, but not that.

Another surprise was that Wiliam, Peter's assistant was set free.

At the chapel I thought about a very little one, like those you may find in castles all over Europe. You brought some windows from a cathredral in Paris in. Another surprise for me.

I expected that Peter had something in his mind with Henry. And if I read the eralier chapters, there was something in that brought it to that point. And you can still increase the Peter - Henry - relationship.

Squirt that little devil is teaching Will now, that typical squirt.

What can we attend in future chapters?

The marriage of Alex and Jason - no question, the only question is, if you do it just in the next chapter - normally you don't do that

Peter and Henry: First Henry must be nulliefied, that was the jugdement. What will that mean to thier relationship? Will Peter do it himself?

Will and Squirt: With the character of Squirt nearly everthing ist possible. By the way, what will be Squirt's gift at the marriage?

Willam: How will he do as a free man? You mentioned, that the others slaves at the island will look very close at Willams life.

You finished some storielines and you opened new line. You still keep everthing interesting. An now everyone can see how important the "transtion" chapter 12 was.

Stefan (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:55 am Again

Stefan (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:33 am I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter

- but take all the time you need to give us

a great story again.

Thank you for the last chapter.

Hey Stefan...

Thanks, thanks, thanks a lot for your review! I loved it!

As for the chapel Jason is having built on the Island, it's not that big you know. If you've ever been to Paris and had a chance to visit the "Sainte-Chapelle", you will remember that it isn't big. It is forming part of the buildings of the "Palais de Justice" (Court House) -once the royal palace before the Louvre palace and Versailles- and it is located on the Île-de-la-Cité, where the Notre-Dame Cathedral is also located. It's a beautiful building... oh... and it was built to enshrine the Crown of Thorns and other sacred relics brought back from the the Crusades. But I'm not guaranteeing you that it was the real Crown of Thorns that the crusaders brought back to Paris (ha ha ha).

Some of your questions will be answered in chapter 14. And my next chapter will be a very important one as things will get "organized" on the Island... You'll see! Ha Ha Ha...

So again... thanks my friend.

Oh by the way, I see that you're from Germany... and I want to tell you that I've been to your country a few times and that I LOVE it. Germany is such a beautiful country!

Danke mein Freund. Und bis bald...

Loverboy.

Crown of Thorns and other sacred relics brought back from the Crusades.

bella (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:10 pm Really enjoyed Chapter 13

Thanks again

I'm glad you enjoyed Chapter 13. And thanks for taking the time to tell me so. I really do appreciate pal.

Oh... and please, keep your comments and reviews coming... it's the only reward that I get for writing the story...

Again, thanks.

Loverboy

jt123456 (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:13 am Just read Ch 13..... another good read -- and another interesting twist. I'm now eagerly awaiting Ch 14 to see how the latest plot threads turn out.

Hey jt123456... wherever you are in the U.S., I thank you for your comment. And

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:23 am I really do appreciate that you took the time to write

it to me. Again, thanks...

God bless you my friend...

Loverboy.

Just finished chapter 13 and I can say without doubt, Loverboy, that you have really done a bang up job. "Bang Up" in more ways than one. Will be awaiting chapter 14.

gandalf (imported) wrote: Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:11 pm Just finished chapter 13 and I can say without doubt, Loverboy, that you have really done a bang up job. "Bang Up" in more ways than one. Will be awaiting chapter 14.

Merci, Merci, Merci Gandalf

I must admit I was expecting something from you, a comment, a review, something... and I wasn't disappointed. But I would have been if I had not heard anything from you...

So I take it that you liked chapter 13, huh? Good! Even though I haven't started writing chapter 14, I already know what I will put in that new chapter and I can already tell you that this new chapter will be a turning point in my story. It will be a very important chapter... and I really hope that you will like the way things turn out. And of course, I will be expecting your review, like always

Loverboy (imported) wrote: Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:33 pm . In the meantime, take good care my friend.

Again: Merci!

Loverboy.

Only 4 comments on chapter 13!

I am sure "Loverboy" needs more encouragement to write