BullGator (imported) wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:12 pm I remember one story where there was a doctor sent to a remote army island where the men were modified (supposedly to keep out lice or something) at the behest of the sergeant. It ended with all the men being nullified. I hope that one can be found again.

I think that is An All Around Improvement by Zoroaster.

Hey guys, there is a REALLY hot story called "Busted" (simple but effective lol) by storyteller. No castration, but superhot busting of a cocky jock in a skimpy speedo by two girls, one of whom is molesting his gf and forcing her to watch, the other who mounts the hunk against his will. Can't even tell you how many of my buttons this pushes...

curious_guy (imported) wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:15 pm I think that is An All Around Improvement by Zoroaster.

Maybe "An Improvement" by Zoroaster.

It was the closest thing I could find. I've edited it up, and it will be in the next update... Whenever that is.

heterosp (imported) wrote: Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:42 pm Hey guys, there is a REALLY hot story called "Busted" (simple but effective lol) by storyteller. No castration, but superhot busting of a cocky jock in a skimpy speedo by two girls, one of whom is molesting his gf and forcing her to watch, the other who mounts the hunk against his will. Can't even tell you how many of my buttons this pushes...

There are four stories by that name in the currently edited archive, including "Busted!" by storyteller.

Busted - by Curious

Busted - by Zipper

Busted - by Justin Cumberland

Busted! - by storyteller

There are a lot of other "Busted by" options (by girlfriend, by stepmother, etc...) already edited and more on their way.

Is there a specific story you'd like us to get to work on? I try to fulfill all requests. (editing requests that is.)

Let me know, and I'll try to help.

If it was not too difficult, it would be nice to have long stories with a lot of chapters separate from the short ones, and each one alltogether so you don't have too go back and find the next chapter all the time. I realise this is not a priority, just that at some stage, it would be nice. I like full-lenth stories better than I like just short one-chapter ones.

I really appreciate all the work that people do first writing, and then other people formatting and so on.

justjustin (imported) wrote: Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:18 am If it was not too difficult, it would be nice to have long stories with a lot of chapters separate from the short ones, and each one alltogether so you don't have too go back and find the next chapter all the time. I realise this is not a priority, just that at some stage, it would be nice. I like full-lenth stories better than I like just short one-chapter ones.

I really appreciate all the work that people do first writing, and then other people formatting and so on.

You and I are of a mind on that. Unfortunately, that is how the stories were submitted, and that is how they are edited.

Because of how the archive orders things, we've tried to be consistent with how they appear in order. For the longer stories (over ten chapters) it used to order the chapters like this;

Chapter 1

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Et Cetera...

Chapter 2

Chapter 20

and so on.

Where I've noticed those chapters, I've changed it to

Chapter 01

Chapter 02

Chapter 03

Et Cetera

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Adding that zero to chapters 1 to 9 helps keep them in better order, and easier to find the next one.

Also, Sometimes the title of the chapters changes slightly. Sometimes with minor spelling errors, or a mix-up in how the different chapters are identified;

My Story - 3

My Story Chapter 1

My Story Continued : Chp. 4

My Story Part 2

I'll change those to;

My Story - Chapter 1

My Story - Chapter 2

My Story - Chapter 3

My Story - Chapter 4

This makes the chapters consistent, and properly ordered in the new archive. My goal is not to change what anyone has written, but make them a lot easier to find, and read in order.

Cainanite (imported) wrote: Tue Feb 28, 2012 10:38 am You and I are of a mind on that. Unfortunately, that is how the stories were submitted, and that is how they are edited.

That's good. Thank you. Justin.

Thank you. Cain

Here's one that I had a flashback on last night and see has not been restored: "Incident In The Brambles" by Kortpeel.

Thanks!

If it is not too much trouble, could someone re edit "College Fees" and "A very special dinner". I am not sure if those are the correct titles, however, they are what I remember the stories being called.