For the Love of Jason

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bella (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:07 am wow - chapter 12 so soon!

another great chapter

please keep them coming

Yeah... chapter 12 is already on the site. It's my Easter gift to all of you guys. I didn't want to leave for my Easter vacation without giving all of you something to read while I'm gone. I hope you will enjoy this new chapter...

Take care,

Loverboy.
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Loverboy (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:49 am Yeah... chapter 12 is already on the site. It's my Easter gift to all of you guys. I didn't want to leave for my Easter vacation without giving all of you something to read while I'm gone. I hope you will enjoy this new chapter...

Take care,

Loverboy.

Wha, great that you remember me. Here at Nam I will not even notice Easter, as they don't know it.

Please enjoy your vacation, you deserved it. If I knew the address I would send a very big basket with Easter-eggs to the island to keep everybody happy as long as you are out

I do love you

Jean
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I just finished Ch 12 and, even with no sex, it was still a good chapter and I enjoyed it as much as the rest.

I do agree that it needed to be written as-is. It would've been nearly impossible to just jump ahead without the transition this chapter has.

Looking forward to the next one when it's ready. :)
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Loverboy (imported) wrote: Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:24 am Thanks pal...

Um... I just sent chapter 12 of my story to the site so it can be published.

In that chapter, you'll find some of the answers you're looking for. Not all, but some... and of course, knowing now that many of you guys like my story, I don't intend to put an end to it just like that.

So again, many thanks my friend 🙏

Loverboy

Chapter 12 was good work agin. You build some bridges to stroies that shall be told in future.

You answered some important questions, so the story can go on. We know that Alex and Jason will be married in future chapters. This time it was nearly nothing told about the rest of the company, but I think it was important to tell about the jugedemnts.

I hope you'll tell us more about Henry and Will. Both are characters you may increase.

Again I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
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I'm glad you enjoyed reading chapter 12. Indeed, it is a transition chapter. It opens many doors... I'm working on chapter 13 at the moment, and there will be many developments in it. And lots of sex, of course (LOL). But not only sex, but also lots of love. Because after all... that's what my story is all about: Love...

Thanks for your review... and take good care.

Loverboy
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Stefan (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:55 am Chapter 12 was good work agin. You build some bridges to stroies that shall be told in future.

You answered some important questions, so the story can go on. We know that Alex and Jason will be married in future chapters. This time it was nearly nothing told about the rest of the company, but I think it was important to tell about the jugedemnts.

I hope you'll tell us more about Henry and Will. Both are characters you may increase.

Again I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.

Ha Ha Ha... Be patient my friend 😄 I think you will like chapter 13. Oh and I have some surprises in store so the story isn't over yet.

Thanks a lot for your nice review. :)

Take care...

Loverboy
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I thoroughly enjoyed Chapter 12. It answers a lot of questions about the happenings in Chapter 11. A very good transition story. I only hope that things continue to progress happily.

Also, glad they are going to get a chapel.
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Hey dude another piece of this master work completed and it rocks!!!

i belive you when you say this chapter shows alot about yourself, you have filled every paragraph with emotion as well as written the need, longing and love of jason and alex so eloquently that it takes my breath away as i read it.

I think you hit the nail on the head with the lack of sex in this chapter as it was driven thouroughly through the emoitional state of the characters which is often hard to do, it was great. :D

Reading it makes me wish i had both an alex and jason of my own lol

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gandalf (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:24 am I thoroughly enjoyed Chapter 12. It answers a lot of questions about the happenings in Chapter 11. A very good transition story. I only hope that things continue to progress happily.

Also, glad they are going to get a chapel.

I'm so glad you liked chapter 12. I was kind of afraid that the readers wouldn't like it very much because there's no sex in that chapter. But so far, it seems that this last chapter was appreciated.

Thanks for your review my friend. I always like to read your comments. Thanks.

Happy Easter

Loverboy
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nullofoxboi (imported) wrote: Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:44 am Hey dude another piece of this master work completed and it rocks!!!

i belive you when you say this chapter shows alot about yourself, you have filled every paragraph with emotion as well as written the need, longing and love of jason and alex so eloquently that it takes my breath away as i read it.

I think you hit the nail on the head with the lack of sex in this chapter as it was driven thouroughly through the emoitional state of the characters which is often hard to do, it was great. :D

Reading it makes me wish i had both an alex and jason of my own lol

Da Foxboi

Thanks so much for your review 🙏

I'm glad that the lack of sex in chapter 12 didn't prevent you from liking reading it.

And thanks a lot pal for taking the time to write your nice review :) I really do appreciate!

Take good care my friend...

Loverboy
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