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Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:49 pm
by gandalf (imported)
This chapter is outstanding. Very believable. Very real that Landen gets sick at the sight of blood. Or was it watching the Dr. do his thing and as the knife cut and blood started seeping? Of course, tht is the same thing actually. Because if the Doc had not cut, there would not have been blood and ,perhaps like many of us, Landen didn't think there would be much blood.

Very good writing, Anon.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:51 pm
by gandalf (imported)
Oh, BTW, I guess Scott/Jiummie is in hog heaven now that he can fuck all he wants and doesn't have to worry about condoms.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 10:12 pm
by Paolo
Took me by surprise. In the meantime, what's Mr. A. to do, since he won't do anything with 'male', other than hug him? Scott/Jimmie the breeder, wow! And now-nullo Henry. What a curve-ball!

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:41 am
by Macchiavelli (imported)
Now that Scottie is safely out of the way the guyes are having a brek, right?

Cannot wait for the next chapter though. Getting ahead of the story daydreaming I considered Landon's options. It might be a twist to have him change his mind...you know, red lights and headphones and all that unexplored suspicious stuff! Dad might be amused to let him keep his tackle, but only in svere chastity until at least 18. Canyon shall be nullified, but put in charge of Landon's training. Landon goes down the spiral of his submissive cravings and becomes addicted to serving and sucking. His ass is open to all and sundry when unplugged. He becomes a real pig bottom boy - and enjoys every minute of it. In an elaborate ceremony Landon will be outfitted with spiked chastity shorts, studded collar and permanent restraints on wrists, ankles and elbows. Canyon on the other hand is presented with soft leather boots clinging to his calves, outlining every muscle, and flat fronted leather tight pants, accentuating his Nullo status. Fingerless gloves and a vest complete the outfit he will wear when training his submissive twin to become the bondage boy he so desires to be....

:-)

See what happens when I have to wait for too long for an installment!

Have a nice day all!

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:20 am
by Paolo
I'm sure we'll have another exciting chapter coming soon. For all we know, Anon could be up to his "arse", as Canyon might say, in snow!

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 11:05 am
by Macchiavelli (imported)
Ah, in that case we'll give Anon the rest of the weekend and the benefit of doubt! :-)

There is no better pastime when snowed in the spin the yarn - wouldn't you agree? ( If I could write and had the time I would do likewise...)

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:03 pm
by Bluecowboi (imported)
Just read the final chapter! A great story all around, hope to see more from Anon and maybe find out who it is someday, thanks for a great story! 🙏

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:59 pm
by gandalf (imported)
Have read the final chapter and feel that Anon did a splendid job in writing this story. The ending tied everything up and let us know some of the future of the two boys. Good to hear that they left town safely.

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:00 pm
by Eunuken (imported)
Wonderful Story, Thank you so much for not dragging it on for 50 chapters. I think the length was perfect, each chapter long enough to keep our attention but not too long to bore us to tears.🙏

Ken

Re: New Neighbor Boy by Anon

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:05 pm
by BroBear (imported)
Great story! Had my attention from day one.

Anon, Thank you for this one.

BTW it would be wonderful to fill in the little side stories you have hinted at.

BroBear