Stefan (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:05 am Don't be afraid about grammatical mistakes. English isn't my first language, too. And for a french speaking person (I think you're that like) you did a very good job. There not many french speaking people with good English skills. I can see that every year, when I'm in France on Holiday (I know your from Quebec). But I'm not in France to speak English, because I speak a little french.

nullofoxboi (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:13 am Hey dude just wanna say such a great story i am soooooo engrossed in it i am waiting for each new installment so please keep going the characters are sooo well written and i promise if you keep wrighting i will be here to post all the reviews you need

Da Foxboi

jt123456 (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:22 pm I've been thoroughly enjoying the story and eagerly wait for each chapter to be posted. I love the characters, plot twists, and generally up-beat flavor. Please, please, PLEASE don't end the story early. Just let the story flow at a natural rate, instead of a quick end. (I wouldn't mind seeing another couple dozen chapters -- the story is that good a read for me.)

There's probably a larger number of readers than you realize, only most don't provide comments. (I run a web site and, like you, appreciate feedback from viewers.)

dctop1970 (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:08 pm Great story - Its one of the best Ive read in a while. Keep up the good work and don't keep us waiting too long. P.S. I went through the hastle of signing up for the message boards after years of being on the website just so I could tell you how much I like the story.

dctop1970 (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:08 pm le of signing up for the message boards

Stefan (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:57 am First of all: You did again a great chapter of the whole story. But many things aren't told yet.

What will happen to Henry in future? Of course the character of Alex is a very social one. Some chapters earlier you wrote, that Alex is working on a law against slavery and forced castrations for slaves (if I rember right). Will Alex change his opinion in that case?

Jason rescued a Senator of Livetime. What kind of gratificaton will he get. I'm not asking, what will Alex will give him - there is no question, because Alex loves Jason very much. But what will the officials do, there should be some thanks from them.

Whats about Private Will? He was involved in that rape. Will he get a punshiment?

You've still some not told story-lines, e. g. John and Jake, Peter and Squirt (or Peter and Henry? )

Especially Peter is only two chapters on the island. Peters assistant William has an untold story, too. How came William to Kristina Island

Its possible that there will be an increasing of the character of Peter.

As you see, there many things can be told

Jean Op den Kamp (imported) wrote: Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:43 am Dear Loverboy,

I am not upto number 11 yet, I take my time to really enjoy your characters

I stayed far to long with Alex and Squirt on the beach, so I am far behind now

But now I see that they took a rib,................................

My God that has happend before, I am afraid that you got yourself in big troubles here. I wonder how you are getting yourself out if this.

Maybe you PA me one time, would be great to hear from you

Oh my god, Eva is coming, shit happens again

Iloveyou Please forgive me my english mistakes