kristoff wrote: Wed Nov 14, 2007 7:55 pm Cannot "conservative" also imply less than fossilization? Perhaps a more contemplative nature in considering how to progress toward a better "whatever" is being considered, as opposed to the often impetuous nature of youth and idealism? Ooops, excuse me, that would be "moderate," perhaps a mix of both?

jenny (imported) wrote: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:57 am .................................................. ..........................................

can you run that by me again I seem to have got a bit lost

I'm not bothered by your typos Jenny. I just put it down to writing style. I'm more interested in the story. It ends abruptly, and I'm left with the uncomfortable feeling that the victim in your story will be shocked and outraged when she finds out what's the guy's done to her. Are you leaving it there or writing a follow up in which she goes to the police and he gets sent to prison on multiple charges of assault, or perhaps she gets revenge and finds a way of 'collecting' his cock?

Or perhaps I'm missing the point completely, and it's really her fantasy being played out. And that her secret wish is that her clit is taken without her consent. Somehow she just got lucky. Or had she mentioned her secret desire to the mutual friend who tipped off our surgeon?

Anyway, as you can tell it's got me thinking, which is more than I can say for a lot of the stories.

Riven (imported) wrote: Thu Nov 15, 2007 6:10 am Anyway, as you can tell it's got me thinking, which is more than I can say for a lot of the stories.

jenny (imported) wrote: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:57 am .................................................. .......................................

Hi Raven,

thanks for your comments, I am glad my fantasy story got you thinking , It certainly has had me thinking as well over the last few days.

But as it is, there will be no follow up as originally planned, it seems the story was put on without the management of EU knowing, I sent the story in to EU in the normal way, A few days later the story appeared on the site.

Plix has informed me the story some how was published by mistake he told me Quote

"I don't whether I mistakenly published it, or whether someone who was not authorised to publish it did so. But whatever happened, it still needed to be fixed before it was ready for publication. "

I have replied to Plinx and asked for the story to be deleted as it obviously is not up to the standard required by the EU, I did not hack in and publish the story as i do not have that sort of know how.

but thank you for your comments and suggestions.

jen

I don't think you should be thinking like that Jenny. You have a lot of supporters here. I don't think punctuation or spelling are criteria for publication here. If they are then there are many stories on here that shouldn't have been posted. I think it sounds like there was a bit of a muddle for a while. That's all. Anyway. Have you got anything else in the pipeline?

jenny (imported) wrote: Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:04 am I have replied to Plinx and asked for the story to be deleted as it obviously is not up to the standard required by the EU, I did not hack in and publish the story as i do not have that sort of know how.

but thank you for your comments and suggestions.

jen

You know, there are probably lots of people on the boards who would be willing to proof-read for you. It's always more difficult to spot one's own typos and mistakes. By contributing to the story archive (particularly with such a good story), you enrich the whole site, and people appreciate that. A bit of proof-reading is definitely not too much for you to ask from us.

I hope it does not get deleted!

I'm glad for whatever mistakes or accidents happened, which caused this story to get published even though it didn't "meet standards". I think the others who have posted comments in this thread would feel the same way.

Let me personally (at least as "personally" as an online message board can be) encourage you to write some more when you have the time and/or the inspiration... Don't be discouraged over tiny insignificant typos -- its the CONTENT and IDEAS and underlying STYLE that really count! You excel in all three areas. Whatever the topic of your next story is, I'm sure it will be good.

markdf (imported) wrote: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:40 pm A bit of proof-reading is definitely not too much for you to ask from us.

I am sure you are right, But I have decided to put this behind me now, and concentrate what i am good at like eating chocolate and partying

Stories are not deleted from the EA except in rare and special cases. Jenny's story is not one of these cases. So her story will stay. She has been informed that future stories will be subject to the guidelines, one of which being that overall spelling and grammar must be at an acceptable level. She has been told that she is welcome to submit stories to the site, but that it will be in her best interest to have them proofread by someone with an excellent knowledge of English grammar.

I would recommend to anyone who knows they need a proofreader to choose wisely - there are many volunteers who think they know English grammar but in reality don't have a clue. There are also many who are more interested in being the first to jerk off to your story than proofreading it.

So Jenny knows what she needs to do. It is up to her to decide whether she will submit stories to the site. I cannot force her to. If she chooses not to, her stories will certainly be missed. If she chooses to continue, then her stories will be subject to the same guidelines as anyone else's.