I just read this and I very much enjoyed it as well.

The only problem I had with it, so far, is the Principal of the school using the boy's preserved genitals as a threat to him. How? And why would it bother him if the rest of the boys are to know?

Anyway, very good read!

having a secret that one can tell close friends and total strangers who don't matter is one thing, to have everyone in your world to know is another. That could be it, but we shall have to wait and see. Im liking the story so far.

Paolo wrote: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:10 pm I just read this and I very much enjoyed it as well.

The only problem I had with it, so far, is the Principal of the school using the boy's preserved genitals as a threat to him. How? And why would it bother him if the rest of the boys are to know?

That bothered me a little too. Another thing that bothered me a little bit is the spelling. If Luke X wants to, he can email me story parts and I can correct the spelling errors and send them back to him. My email address is curious_guy@hush.com.

Anyway, very good read!

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I agree. I want to read more parts even if Luke X does not do anything about the spelling.

curious_guy (imported) wrote: Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:17 am It has been a long time since

Luke X has posted a new part to this story. I hope he continues it.

One thing Luke X could do is have Max's rape of Nick be caught on a security video and when his parents see the video they have Max penectomized or nullified as punishment and to make it so that he can never rape anyone again.

Luke, if you are still around, or even if you are a rectangle, please finish this story. Pretty please with sugar on top. If you need help with spelling, punctuation or grammar, send me an email.

He was done right after his 10th birthday.

Shortpop22 (imported) wrote: Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:37 pm He was done right after his 10th birthday.

I'll have to revisit that story line. I'm flattered that anyone even remembers it.

Atreyu aka Luke X