Guess I'll chime in with a "me too," for the first one...personally I thought the sequels got a little too into the child-welfare stuff, but that's just my tastes. Keep writin' 'em.

I too found that in the sequels the tone was changed from very light-hearted and just for fun to a slightly more serious tone that dealt with finding the children homes while at the same time still having a lot of the fun and keeping most of the whimsical feeling that the first one had. While I enjoyed the original the best for it's carefree and fun I still enjoyed the sequels. All in all they were good sequels to the story. The only suggestion that I could make would be to break future one's into slightly smaller chapters than the sequels. Keep up the writing! Your efforts are appreciated!

blondboy (imported) wrote: Thu May 03, 2007 8:56 pm The only suggestion that I could make would be to break future one's into slightly smaller chapters than the sequels.

I agree about the chapters. I also found that there were so many characters that I had trouble keeping track of who is who. I hope that in future parts, the author includes a cast list at the beginning of the chapter that would include the following for every character:

name, age, who they are related to, who they are sleeping with, and what genital mods they have had done.

For example:

Art, 15 but looks 10 and acts 12, half brother to Artie, sleeping with Aaron, micropenis and born without balls.

Mac, 40 something, son of Jospeh, sleeping with Perry, nullo.

Thanks for the delightful stories. introducing the ladies to every one is like a cast list. If you don't know the cast by sequel 3 get checked for "What's his names disease"

Yes, it takes me 2 days to read a sequel on a cell phone. The print is small, The stories are long.

Hey that's a good thing!!

The care of children made my eyes water as much as the lady who interviewed me about being a gay father. I still check on my kids if they don't check on me every day.

Again I enjoyed your stories. Set in the south (the tribes and the distance sound more like South Dakota)