"The Waxing Party"

[Zoroaster (imported)]

Guess I'll chime in with a "me too," for the first one...personally I thought the sequels got a little too into the child-welfare stuff, but that's just my tastes. Keep writin' 'em.

[blondboy (imported)]

I too found that in the sequels the tone was changed from very light-hearted and just for fun to a slightly more serious tone that dealt with finding the children homes while at the same time still having a lot of the fun and keeping most of the whimsical feeling that the first one had. While I enjoyed the original the best for it's carefree and fun I still enjoyed the sequels. All in all they were good sequels to the story. The only suggestion that I could make would be to break future one's into slightly smaller chapters than the sequels. Keep up the writing! Your efforts are appreciated!

[curious_guy (imported)]

The only suggestion that I could make would be to break future one's into slightly smaller chapters than the sequels.

I agree about the chapters. I also found that there were so many characters that I had trouble keeping track of who is who. I hope that in future parts, the author includes a cast list at the beginning of the chapter that would include the following for every character:

name, age, who they are related to, who they are sleeping with, and what genital mods they have had done.

For example:

Art, 15 but looks 10 and acts 12, half brother to Artie, sleeping with Aaron, micropenis and born without balls.

Mac, 40 something, son of Jospeh, sleeping with Perry, nullo.

[george2u2 (imported)]

Thanks for the delightful stories. introducing the ladies to every one is like a cast list. If you don't know the cast by sequel 3 get checked for "What's his names disease"

Yes, it takes me 2 days to read a sequel on a cell phone. The print is small, The stories are long.

Hey that's a good thing!!

The care of children made my eyes water as much as the lady who interviewed me about being a gay father. I still check on my kids if they don't check on me every day.

Again I enjoyed your stories. Set in the south (the tribes and the distance sound more like South Dakota)