...and the glitch is in the PRINTER FRIENDLY FORMAT. My eyes were tired when I went to read part 2, and I printed it this way. My printed version ended with "How am I going to explain this at school?" spoken by Eric. No wonder I was screaming at the end of 2 and was lost in part 3 at the start! I went back and double checked, and sure enough, the PRINTER FRIENDLY format had dropped like 4 pages of the end of the story. Be careful of this!

Still, now that I know what's going on, I'm even more thrilled! And of course, I screamed again at the end of 3!

best story I have seen on the archive. keep up the good work.

Woah!

I was glued to my monitor while reading through all three parts of your story!

It`s definitely the kind of story I like very much, well written and not without humor

I`m looking forward to the next part.

Please, get to it soon!

Bye, Tanish

Super story! Gives a whole new slant on the concept of slavery. Now if a prospective slave could only be assured he'd have a Master like Alexi....

In case no one noticed, part 4 is out! Go read it now! It just keeps getting better!

:p :p :p :p

Thanks for your notice, Paolo!

I really missed it when I last visited.

And again:

Very good, David, very good!

Your style is descriptive and very nice to read.

And I like the idea of Erics modification really much.

I`m looking forward to part 5



May the inspiration never leave you,

Tanish

I have to add my voice to the chorus: this is a very well-written, creative, and intriguing story. A pleasure to read!

I finally read this story last night -- all four parts (so far) in one sitting. Yipes! This story is awesome!! This is the first story that has made me feel I might enjoy life as a slave -- at least if Duncan was my master.

Waiting impatiently for Part 5.

Don

vorpalboy (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 22, 2002 8:09 pm I have to add my voice to the chorus: this is a very well-written, creative, and intriguing story. A pleasure to read!

thanks to everyone for the generous support. i'm glad the story is meeting with everyone's approval. after a brief interruption -- for some reason, my professors have this insane idea that i should be bogged down with things like attending class and actually doing homework instead of doing what i really enjoy -- i am back working on part 5 and hope to have it posted this week.

david