WheelyCurious wrote: Mon Jul 17, 2023 8:05 pm
I read it and mostly enjoyed it... Not my thing for sex activity, so wouldn't have been a 'jerk and run' even if I still could :-\ but I thought the sex /
scenes struck a pretty good balance of telling what was happening without total 'play-by-play' detail....
Sometimes the stuff about feelings and emotions got a bit drawn out IMHO but tastes on that differ...
Overall I'd say it was well written and enjoyable, and any lack of enjoying on my part was only due to not matching my particular tastes, not any failure on LT's part (or the AI's)... So definitely 5-star grade, but won't be a 'favorite'
WheelyCurious
It's definitely more... um... cerebral. Which is why it is likely low rated, etc. I'm not worried about such things, just saying that's likely the reason. A lot of folks just want to get to the fiction archive for a quick spank and run, and then move on with their day. Totally understandable, and not in anyway mocking them. Most of my favorites in my list of 50 bookmarked stories are such, and many of them have been on that list for years.
Those are great for a quick wank and pop, which I know most folks are after. For those wanting actual reading material with a plot, build-up of characters, and a destination, Metamorphosis and Metamorphosis: Origins would likely be a better option.
Life as it should be will be much the same if I can get it back up and running. Though it's two parts fiction, one part reality. But these days, with as many nullos as there are, it's difficult to write something fictional but realistic, and not have it parallel someone, somehow.
scenes struck a pretty good balance of telling what was happening without total 'play-by-play' detail....
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