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Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Thu May 18, 2023 5:23 pm
by Valery_V (imported)
The hero is engaged in an accompanying business so that ... not in vain disappear.
(Ha ha! I read it, but it made me a little nauseous

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Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Sat May 20, 2023 2:33 pm
by Paolo
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Metamorphosis - Chapter 1: The Distorted Reflection [G]
Submission Date: 2023-05-19By: Jack Soffonmen
[Gay] [Nullification] [Penectomy] [Testicles]
Adrian Blair has a longing desire, and unexpectedly stumbles upon the solution to achieving it during a long winter walk through his dark city.
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Sat May 20, 2023 8:07 pm
by Paolo
Metamorphosis - Chapter 2: Unraveling the Tapestry of the Soul [G]
https://eunuchworld.co/s16477
Paolo wrote: Sat May 20, 2023 2:33 pm
Submission Date: 2023-05-19By: Jack Soffonmen
[Gay] [Nullification] [Penectomy] [Testicles]
Adrian
begins his journey, undergoing medical tests and therapy appointments. Will he receive a date for his ultimate transformation?
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 9:38 am
by Paolo
Metamorphosis - Chapter 3: The Chrysalis Opens [G]
https://eunuchworld.co/s16478
Submission Date: 2023-05-25 By: Jack Soffonmen
[Gay] [Nullification] [Penectomy] [Testicles]
There are going to be many more chapters. I have about 4 in mind now, and the way the story is evolving it may be a LOT more. It may turn into a small novel. But I'm having fun with it, and feel energized to continue. I've gotten out in front a bit and have written a much later chapter, so I have something to work towards. Several more "main events" are coming.
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 1:36 pm
by Losethem (imported)
Paolo wrote: Fri May 26, 2023 9:38 am
Metamorphosis - Chapter 3: The Chrysalis Opens [G]
https://eunuchworld.co/s16478
Submission Date: 2023-05-25 By: Jack Soffonmen
[Gay] [Nullification] [Penectomy] [Testicles]
There are going to be many more chapters. I have about 4 in mind now, and the way the story is evolving it may be a LOT more. It may turn into a small novel. But I'm having fun with it, and feel energized to continue. I've gotten out in front a bit and have written a much later chapter, so I have something to work towards. Several more "main events" are coming.
Presently, there are 4 more chapters finished or in stages of VERY minor editing. A fifth additional chapter is basically written, but I'm not sure I like how it's turned out, so may go back and start over on it. There are at least 4 more chapters before we get to the second nullification in the story arc, but these additional chapters will provide background to the world Adrian inhabits, and what it means to be a nullo. Things like how relationships are found, what the body feels like, how a nullo feels sexual pleasure, etc.
Metamorphois is not meant to be a quick in-and out, let's slash their man bits off in the first 2 paragraphs in the interest of letting the reader pop his cork, good time. One key element of the story won't happen until very near the end. All I'll say at this point is there was a rather tragic and/or cruel reason the facility, Metamorphosis, came into existence.
I just hope those of you reading it will stick around long enough to find out.
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 4:04 pm
by Paolo

I hate to say it, LT, but as you probably already know... longer, more intricate works, with a plot and excellent writing (yes, you!) don't generate a whole of feedback on here. I do hope that you continue this 5-star work! I know I will be reading and rating it, but also hoping that you are deriving intrinsic satisfaction (as I do from writing) - because you probably won't get much here!

Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 6:40 pm
by WheelyCurious
As one that enjoys the longer works, I sometimes wish the story listings included the length or file size as a rough indicator of length.... I'd love to be better able to avoid the two paragraph 'rox-off' stories that LT was mentioning...
I'm enjoying this series.
WheelyCurious
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 7:24 pm
by Paolo
Readers, please go and give LT the stars and comments he deserves!
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Fri May 26, 2023 9:06 pm
by Valery_V (imported)
I always give all authors five stars regardless of the length of their stuff...

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Is Jack Soffonmen a LT?
Re: May 2023 New Stories
Posted: Sat May 27, 2023 6:16 am
by Paolo
Yes, that's his pen-name. Like Stephen King being Richard Bachman.