Part 2 didn't do so well in the star rating department. If you don't like a story that's fine. But it'd be helpful if you told me why you didn't like it so I can try to do better next time.

You have to keep a couple of things in mind when posting something like this.

First, it's been there for a while. A lot of the readers who once read it and rated it may not be here anymore.

With it being posted as a sequel, some of those readers may have chosen to not read it, being satisfied with the initial story as it is.

And as an afterthought, readership just isn't what it used to be.

Very well done work and it was a joy to read. I'm going back into the archive now to find more, thank you very much for posting, and I can only encourage you to continue. Thanks for your work.