"Lord of the flies" by Sander

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I just read part 24. I liked it. I think it is interesting that Roger has had all the slaves "capped". Maybe he will decide that only he should not be "capped" and have all the boys "capped" one at a time. Maybe he discovers that one of the slaves can still perform and have him double "capped".
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I just read part 25. I am glad that Sander is continuing the story. I hope that the guys that live in the cave capture Johnny and Lester does to Johnny what Johnny did to him only more so.
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One thing that bothers me a little about this series is that all the boys say or think "cock". I think some of them would use other words, especially the church boys. I think that "cock" is usually considered to be the most offensive word for penis. I do not think the church boys would use the most offensive word.

I think that most American boys say "dick" and that most English boys say "willy". Maybe some of the boys could say willy, dick, wiener or peter.
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I read part 26 several days ago. I liked it. I am glad that Johnny got most of what he deserved. I wonder if any of the boys will be complete when they are rescued. Will any of them not be "capped"?
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