kk, thanks.

I put the manuscript on my blog entry.

I'm glad if you guys leave comments there

about where you couldn't understand what I wrote.

You need to send the story file to:

eafictionarchive (at) gmail (dot) com

Ops, I had planed about that one yet.

"If you need help or advice with your story before you submit it to the Archive, post here to request it. Also, anyone who wants to be a beta reader, or needs a beta reader, can post here as well"

I wanted grammar adviser.