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Re: Separation Anxiety (by caultron)
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:32 am
by caultron (imported)
curious_guy (imported) wrote: Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:17 pm
I would like to read a separation story about two, gay, 13-year-old lovers who get separated from their bits. Maybe the top gets separated first and then the bottom gets separated a few weeks later.
Thanks, I'll keep that concept in mind. Usually, though, I liketo keep my characters eighteen-ish.
In the meantime, you may enjoy The Trouble With Worn-Out Jeans at
http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/T/ea_143146the_trou.htm and
http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/T/ea_113051trouble_.htm
caultron
Re: Separation Anxiety (by caultron)
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 10:30 am
by ramses (imported)
Read all the chapters and really enjoyed the story. I kind of envision it being caused by an alien parasite that gives a consiousness to the detatched penis.
Would be funny if the detached penis' started getting stuck in the girls and leaving them sealed up and smooth with some sort of phermonal or psychic bond forming between the girl and penis owner that allows them to feel pleasure shen their crotches are close to each other. Then the other person is the only one in the world that can give them sexual pleasure for the rest of their lives.
The only way the penis would detath is if the girl died then the penis would seek a new host.
Re: Separation Anxiety (by caultron)
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:29 am
by caultron (imported)
ramses (imported) wrote: Fri Mar 12, 2010 10:30 am
Read all the chapters and really enjoyed the story. I kind of envision it being caused by an alien parasite that gives a consiousness to the detatched penis.
Would be funny if the detached penis' started getting stuck in the girls and leaving them sealed up and smooth with some sort of phermonal or psychic bond forming between the girl and penis owner that allows them to feel pleasure shen their crotches are close to each other. Then the other person is the only one in the world that can give them sexual pleasure for the rest of their lives.
The only way the penis would detath is if the girl died then the penis would seek a new host.
That's an interesting idea, but existing chapters have already mentioned girls fooling around with separated penises and the penises didn't get stuck.
Then again, maybe it only happens if the girl doesn't put a condom on it...
In any event, I think you will see something along these lines. Stay tuned.
And thanks for writing, and for your feedback.
caultron
Re: Separation Anxiety (by caultron)
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:25 pm
by ramses (imported)
It could just take a while for the penis to mature enough to reach the next "reimplantation stage". A year the first detachments started and all the men are becoming infected with the penis symbiot of unknown origin the reimlantations start. After they impant and seal the vaginas, they end up getting the girl pregnant and become uncorked at childbirth. The children are normal except the boys are infected with the parasite that makes their cocks fall off. Oh well, just food for thought.
Also, do the boys eventually feminize or turn all the way into women? Are some of the guys letting out some sort of phermone and what purpose would that phermone have for the penis? It's a great story with so many places that it could lead! Thanks for writing!!!
Re: Separation Anxiety (by caultron)
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:36 pm
by caultron (imported)
ramses (imported) wrote: Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:25 pm
It could just take a while for the penis to mature enough to reach the next "reimplantation stage". A year the first detachments started and all the men are becoming infected with the penis symbiot of unknown origin the reimlantations start. After they impant and seal the vaginas, they end up getting the girl pregnant and become uncorked at childbirth. The children are normal except the boys are infected with the parasite that makes their cocks fall off. Oh well, just food for thought.
Also, do the boys eventually feminize or turn all the way into women? Are some of the guys letting out some sort of phermone and what purpose would that phermone have for the penis? It's a great story with so many places that it could lead! Thanks for writing!!!
Yeah, that's generally what I was thinking: some sort of time delay.
I hadn't planned on the guys eventually feminizing or turning into women. However, if males become non-masculine and females become non-feminine, it could become difficult to tell them apart.
The next chapter should answer some questions about where this is going, but of coure it'll raise others as well.
In any event, thanks for writing, and for your suggstions and feedback.
caultron